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shirotora
I'm just a simple, southern man that loves ponies, Star Wars, ridiculousness, and adorable things. I'm also an ex-Navy nuclear machinists mate, and life long martial artist.
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Thumbs up, if only for that ending.
And then kirins happened...
Oh my god, that ending though.
Well that's one way to get potassium.
Must... not... laugh... out... loud...
I can't help it
That ending is too funny
Figured I would just skim this, skipping in parts, to reach that "hilarious" ending everyone keeps rattling on about (which isn't as big a deal as I was led to believe). But then I got riveted and read the whole thing.
nice Rule 63 story and you right we don't see Barblusive that much
Hahaha
the ending cant stop lol best thumbs up
This is a bit much I feel. The rest is pretty good, but the realism here is lacking.
Abridged Version:
Barb: "Puberty sucks!"
Dusk: "I'll get help."
Moonbutt: "She needs the D!"
Dusk: "This is not the help I was expecting"
Elusive: "I'm sexually attracted to a 12 year old."
Moonbutt: "There are glaring holes in the Equestrian legal system."
Elusive: "Have a ring Barb, we'll bang OK?"
Barb: "Unf."
Elusive "Unf."
Dusk: "I am surprisingly okay with this whole thing."
Barb: "Banana, om nom nom."
Dusk: "I am no longer okay."
...I was bored.
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That's pretty much spot on
6900297 That was a surprisingly succinct summary.
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I can't laugh in class. Help.
6900297 That's about it in a nutshell
That ending alone was worth the price of admission.
6905840 So it's worth nothing?
6907228 lol Well one could argue the price of admission is the readers attention. I mean you can read without paying attention but where's the fun in that.
That ending really was hilarious though.
If nothing else, this story was good in verifying one of my headcanon theories. Since at least two episodes have Spike grow to giant adulthood and snap back to a kid like a rubberband, I figure Dragons have a very different viewpoint on things like how old a dragon gets before reaching legal adult age, the age of consent, and that their appearances are deceptive in how old a Dragon actually is. This helps justify some of my Sparity fics.
7203227 That and dragon culture, from what I've seen, isn't one to put down many laws. They seem the type to just let each other do whatever they wish.
Personally, I see 'greed growth', as it's commonly called, as different from natural aging. If you noticed, Spike went feral when he grew, acting more like an animal than a sapient being, but other dragons that size were in control.
7206878 There is that. But like most geeks, I accept only the parts that confirm my headcanon!
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I agree it was rushed at that part
At the beginning, Artemis says "I will use the spell I mentioned." But I couldn't find any mention of any spells prior to that. What was he talking about?
Edit: jk found it. The relief spell. I'm dumb.
"I'm out!"
I get it, Sugar and Spice are genderbent versions of Snips and Snails
It's pretty much average in my mind. It's interesting to see genderbent characters, but the logic feels a bit out of character for the sake of the plot. Overall: meh. Not great, not terrible. Keep writing!
Glorys end...