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I pity a fool who don't like this story!
I pity the fool who don't like this.
Well done, bro.
~Skeeter The Lurker
This was a interesting story, It will be so much better now that Spike got it out the way and will have more confidence next time. This would make a interesting series if they keep trying to find more and more interesting places to fool around lol.
a bit too wordy couldnt really get into it
Good times shall be had indeed.
Pretty good. A bit repetative in places, and too much exposition, but effective for what it is.
good for what it was, but it lost me at "dragons who don’t truly love their mate might be impervious to this spell" ... so upvote, but no fave
It looks like something got cut off, including the beginning of this line.
sink's faucet?
"a lore" doesn't work; lore isn't a synonym for "myth" or "legend".
You could do an AMAZING series with this story. Because you set'd it up so that it would be perfect for another story to add on
4166968 No signature?
Who are you again?
4202191
Dunno what you're talking about...
~Skeeter The Lurker
4171126 Iunno what happened.
Everything's fixed, though.
Let me get this straight: Since Spike truly loved Rarity, he would not have inpregnated Rarity when he climaxes inside her? But if Spike didn't love Rarity (or any other potential mate), he would have knocked her up?
I don't get it. I would think that it would be the other way around: where there is a fail-safe of dragons where the dragon could climax inside his mate, and if that dragon truly loves his mate, his swimmers would concieve, and he and his mate would have a child. Obviously there isn't a restriction of the species of a dragon's mate. And then it it wasn't true love, even if the dragon climaxes inside his partner, no matter how many times, they will not concieve. The swimmers would be barren or just simply infertile.
Maybe I'm looking at this wrong>>Maybe Spike's is insanely virile and fertile, and even though Rarity told him not to come inside, she hedged herself with an anti-pregnancy spell to prevent getting pregnant from Spike right then because she knew that he would climax in her womb (by accident, obviously).
Basically, I'm confused
. Can someone clear the air for me? 
4660488 It was a trap. If Spike didn't truly love Rarity, she would've gotten pregnant, and as punishment for being greedy, Spike would've had to care for the child. He loved Rarity, so she didn't get pregnant. It's tough to comprehend, but just think of it like this: Rarity was just fucking around with Spike.
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Still a little confusing
, but I think I get it now.
This goes back to the "if love is true, be willing to let him/her go" saying. Spike is willing to let Rarity soar and thrive because he loves her, and if he knocked her up, it would be a proverbial ball and chain to both of them even though they didn't love each other truthfully. (They would be parents, have to take care of the child, and possibly would torpedo any future aspirations because they need all that time to raise him/her/it).
It's a little roundabout, but I can kinda understand.
And hey, when the time comes, I can predict that Spike's willing to be a godfather if Rarity ever had a child (obviously it would be some stallion else.) Or the fail-safe could temporarily "fail" 
"It says here Dragons mate for life"
" oops"
"should of stayed out of her!"
"Cool!"
"Oh my Spikey Wikie"
"ride em cowpony"
"buns burnin in the oven"
"Library's fail safe spell"
"need a baby sitter?"
"Knocked up ,over & down!"
"Stay out of the booze?"