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ShadeJak


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Trixie Lulamoon has always been a theatrical and imaginative filly living in her own world where she gets to be one great and powerful hero or another, and now that she's starting school at the esteemed Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns, she hopes to make her dreams come true! But when school proves it may be more then she can handle, the young filly lets her imagination run wild and it brings her on a few adventures inside and out of class!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 19 )

Filly Trixie is beyond cute!
I look forward to more Trixie adventures.

--Spade

hmmm trixie is very interesting

Ooh, bad influence, Trixie. RUN!

“Hmph, who would be so desperate for attention they’d boast about things that aren’t true?” Trixie mused with an eyeroll.

Oh, this is so harsher in hindsight. *Winces*

Okay, liking this a lot. Cute, fun and adorable.

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:trixieshiftright: The Great and Powerful Trixie, who has defeated an Ursa Major and whose magic is second to none in Equestria, has no idea what you're talking about.

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Thanks! Depending on how the week goes, the next chapter may be up this weekend.

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Agreed. Trixie is an awesome Calvin.

Okay, I officially LOVE this story now. :D Keep it coming.

I was expecting Nightmare Moon actually. And as petty as the Countess's plan is, it does make sense, it is hard to conquer anything if you're a pile of dust.

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Not to mention it all exists in little filly Trixie's fantasies, so she's more likely to dream up an alter-ego of her school nemesis that she has a more personal vendetta with as an enemy to face at the end. :rainbowdetermined2:

But yes, were that adventure's setting applied anywhere else, it obviously would have been Nightmare Moon.

YAY! More of Trixie and her never ending fantasies! I hope Trixie gets to knock down Sunset Shimmer a bottomless pit few pegs.

5095345 Given enough time Sunset will do that all on her own. ;)

“Hmph, who would be so desperate for attention they’d boast about things that aren’t true?” Trixie mused with an eyeroll.

Awww, such cute foreshadowing, and at the same time so sad.

A secret that this manor keeps, down below from the sun its Countess sleeps! At midnight’s call, she comes out to prey. Where she cannot be seen, will be found the way!

This sounds like there is a passage way behind a mirror. If vampires cannot see their own reflection. Let's find out.... Yep. I like how this riddle is simple, but sounds kind of complicated to a child, definately something I could see a filly come up with in her imagination. ^^


Oh my gosh. That Scooby Doo reference. xD
I never would have thought I'd see that in writing.



Something I noticed:

“The past of the town of Hollow Shades is remains the source of many an old ponies’ tale to this day,”
-is*

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All fixed, and thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it :twilightsmile:

Hope you enjoy the chapters that follow as well! I just have one more left to write. Few young fillies can match the imagination of the Great and Adorable Trixie!

Based on the title here, I'm going to guess we'll be seeing a western Trixie tale.

“She just needs to be cool enough for everypony to love…”

Awww.

I like the bit of character exploration you put in the opening of this chapter. Trixie does want friends, but doesn't know how to get them. Apparently feels she isn't good enough, so tries to be cooler. Which explains a bit why she has the fantasies, and why she ended up as a boastful stagemagician later on, what's cooler than defeating an ursa major?

Sandbox = Desert setting, so that's what brought this fantasy on. xD

It's too bad the movie showed Sunset as having no concept of friendship, cause I would have liked to see Trixie and Sunset get along later. It might still happen, but I'm not holding out hope, heh.

Notes:

Walking around them, Trixie discovered that indeed nopony else was playing her, giving her the place to herself.

While it is technically true that nopony was roleplaying 'Trixie', I think you meant "here".*

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Thanks! I'm glad you've enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

Yeah, that's what I was aiming for. It all seemed a very appropriate(and of course adorable) way to depict Trixie's fillyhood :twilightsmile:

Error fixed. :twilightsmile: Hope you enjoy the next chapter, too!

I'm liking this back and forth in between her imagination and reality.

Keep up the good work!

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Thanks! Hope you enjoy the other adventures she ends up in :twilightsmile:

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