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Lunafan1k


Navy Vet working IT, I usually write about whatever inspires me.

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A realistic take on a terrible OC pony story. An OC walks into Ponyville one day, everyone is disgusted and just cannot fathom what he is, and he thinks they love him and are stunned by his 'beauty.' He's on a quest to find his mother Celestia and proclaims his love of Discord. And this is how his world ends.

Twilight and Applejack think he's completely insane, shenanigans ensue as they try to keep him from causing any more trouble.

First person is from the OCs point of view, while third person is whats actually going on.

OC belongs to Mapu

1)Red coat, black mane.

2)Magicked on manticore wings, orange with red insides, with clearly visible bald spots where they joint the body. (modified to just orange and red manticore wings, no bald spot)

3)Smells like something is rotting, because the wings. (Wings changed to magical constructs. Smell is because of a rotten banana tied to his horn with string.)

4) thinks that being "alicorn" means that every one wants to be with him and running away means that they are shy. (Alicorn more implied, Nobility and Prince focused upon)

5)Is bisexual and in love with Discord. (mentioned a number of times but Discord does not make an appearance)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

NIce.
I still wish Discord was in the fic tho :pinkiehappy:
Great job.

4865646 Yeah me too, but I couldn't find a way to get him to randomly show up for a single scene, play along as though they were in love, then leave without making it sound forced. I tried to make up for that with the Spike incident thought :twilightblush:

4865878 There should be a scene where he flirts with guards as they drag him away.:pinkiecrazy:

This is really interesting. Chrysalis as an OC was really funny.

And yes, BRING ON THE SEQUEL! :pinkiecrazy:

oh gawd... just uh... wow... I'm going to need some time to think.........

This needs a sequel. Very amusing, yet also rather sad, for Chryssi.

They missed a perfect opportunity to prank Discord.

So....The queen want to be a prince!?:twilightoops:

OH god its brilliant! xD
Don't stop writing this.

Have this pic for encouragement
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ORIGINAL THE CHARACTER. DO. NOT. STEAL!!!

“You know my mother?!” K. Sys exclaimed, “This second horn-”

“That’s a rotten banana…” Twilight tried to correct.

“-was given to me by my dear mother, Celestia! Alas, it is all I have as a memento of her!” He said, flopping around on the floor for reasons unknown.

I fucking DIED! This is fucking GOLD! Here, have a favorite and a follow, you glorious sunuvabitch, you!

Here are the words I would like to share on this fic, almost verbatim:

I highly doubt sleep deprivation was the only mind altering effect you were suffering while writing this.

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