• Published 21st Jul 2014
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My Dancing Queen - MaxBeezy



A stallion comes across Queen Chrysalis dancing. Fun ensues.

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Comments ( 44 )

Unless dancing zombies are real,

They are, my friend

Paul Gilbert Reference #142

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

the video is so epic... i must read the fic that came from it

mooooore

Tis story was hot.

I personally have watched the video about 35,563 times and counting.

Good story, but that was some horrible dancing.

more more MORE I want more

Question: Glowing green eyed slave to Chrysalis like Shinning was, or in control of his own thoughts and emotions? Cause the fact that his eyes glowed green at one point has be wondering if he simply lost his mind to her.

This is now my favorite clopfic.

That video.

Waiting for dancing....
Waiting for dancing....
Waiting for dancing....

Dancing not found,
End playback.

... What was the bloody point of all that build up? :facehoof:

So thanks for that.

4732568 She's totally dancing. She's doing her own version of the Commander Shepard. :rainbowlaugh:

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All those who want a sequel like this comment. We want MOORE. :yay::eeyup::pinkiehappy:

I'm not gonna lie, when I saw that title I thought this was going to be some sort of ABBA-fueled sex romp with a side of mature cheese.

I can't say I'm not a shade disappointed...

(It's still hot, though.)

You should continue this! :D

4732877 That was me at my school's Homecoming dance, lol.

I'll definitely be reading this soon.

DAYUM. Okay I'll admit, that was hot.

Hhaahahahahahahahahaha! It was just a matter of time until somebody wrote a sex fic about this hot youtube video. And you were the first one! LOOOOOOOOOOOOL!:rainbowlaugh:

Awesome btw!

4739236

video? anyway good job on this, it was really good!

4741573 The word "Video" in the description is highlighted in green, making it clickable. It's a link to the youtube video that inspired the story. :twilightsmile:

4741768

did not notice, thanks!

Write more one shots like this NOW! MOAR!

This needs a continuation, awesome story!

i agree i would love to see a sequel to this story:twilightsmile:

One of the best :D 10/10 ftw

Well, now! That was...different from what I read.

dancing zombies is that a reference to michael jackson thriller?

I loved it all it was awesome .I want to see a sequel where he becomes king and turns her good with his love.And can she be pregnant he did come in side her twice.

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plz make sequel
I need more of my queen :heart::heart::heart:

Captures the sexual high that the main character was experiencing extremely well. Erotic and well-written. 8/10. Great job.

More! We demand more!:flutterrage:

i enjoyed it


stay classy:moustache:

That was hot.

Though I find it weird that changelings would walk on two hooves and yet have no hands. Hopefully in this verse their shapeshifting doesn't revert back to normal when dispelled or out off energy, otherwise they'd be at a severe disadvantage in any such situation, not being able to do anything requiring fine manual control.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Please make a sequel to this in the current events after Season 7. Where he finds her in a cave near the new kingdom or something and make it right like you did here but better

This is both hot and romantic.

Stallion: Make me your's and together, we can rule the world as king and queen! 😈

Still, at the present time, this sun is killing me to death.

https://youtu.be/_PSfgR2BJLg

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