Soarin was told to do one thing. One thing that would bring glory and fame to the Wonderbolts, and of course to himself. It was so simple, but in a incredible turn of events, he stumbled upon the only individual willing to volunteer herself for the cause.
Great work! I hope to see more.
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Hey! Thanks for the comment, I'll be posting more about these two soon enough. Just kinda hard to get a little motivated when what you're unsure about your writing abilities. Thanks anywho!
4857681 I did notice a few grammatical errors here and there, but I honestly wouldn't worry about that. You're doing great.
4857856
Haha, I would think so, I should really give it a read over thanks for reading and the follow!!!
4857893 No problem.
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Got some spelling to sort out. Nothing big.
I like it, can't wait for the next chapter!
4872841
Why would you bring this here? Dude, I'll fight you on this.
4872940
Hey thanks for the comment, and yes I need to fix those.
4874609 Great story. Just reminding you who's best ship.
4874666
Nah...
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I Love this ship
4891468
Me too!