I love this fandom, best thing to ever happen to me. Obviously, my favorite ship is Rainbow Dash and Soarin. I will have many other stories so stay posted. I will see you all next time, Brohoof.
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After a day of training Rainbow tries to talk with Soarin, but is ignored as he walks away. However, Soarin later finds out that Rainbow as the same feelings for him as he does for her. He then treats her to a very romantic weekend. Read to find out how everything went during the weekend and what was their response to each other feelings.
Thanks to Dashie-Potter for the editing.
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My favorite pairing.
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Thank you! Oh and don't worry I will.
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I Love it too thus my name.
I loved editing for you
ONE WORD TO DESCRIBE THIS STORY:AWESOME
I like the ship but I'll be honest at the beginning I feel you came on to fast. Instead of detail to the story, you basically made Soran seem like a stud with the mares rather than a nervous stallion..Referencing the fact you at first made him seem nervous. The perspectives are a cool idea but you still didn't add detail. Storys need detail man, I'm not trying to be mean I'm just being truthful.
Well its a good story,
for a good ship. Soarin 
6610894 Thank you! Thank you!
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I know but I am so bad at going in depth like that, some times I like to let the mind do that.
6611060 Thanks!
I'm starting to edit the other stories
I'm in the pancakes part and my ocd didn't let me pass without saying that it isn't how you make pancakes..I'M SO SORRY but it's a good story so far
Just finished and its so cute
Great story! I really enjoyed reading it!
6612036 Yeah sorry. Want to make that part a little more unique. But, thanks!
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Adorable!! A little fast pace, but ADORABLE!!!
6613764 Thank you!
Agh I have so many problems with this story, but I will not unleash them here, overall it's ok and I like the ship. That is all for the positive at least.
I do hope you keep it up, your stories are well made, but they have an issue with pacing. Give your characters time to breathe. For instance, if Rainbow bumps into Soarin while flying, what was Soarin thinking about anyway? Was he not paying attention and he slammed into her? How did she take that? Let the situation develop a little more slowly. What are Soarin's interests outside of Rainbow? Even if most of his thoughts really do revolve around Rainbow, which can make sense for a couple, what about her does he think about other than how to romance her and how much he generally loves her? What is it about her that drives him up a wall? What makes him like her beyond physical attraction and youthful pheromones (yea, those are a thing no doubt, but they don't produce lasting relationships)?
It was a bit fast paced
es.......................ist......................................die......................süßeste Geschichte ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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