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when sweetie belles arrives at Buttons front door, she asks for help with her babysitting for the cakes, forced to, Button has to be Sweetie belles baby for the day. She feeds him, diapers him and treats him just like a baby. Will this be horrible for Button or maybe not so bad...
Warning: contains diapers, babying, and used diapers.
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can someone pleeeaaasse make a good picture for this story i would appreciate it alot.
is this story complete or not
It was alright, but needs some improvement. I'll follow
Omg so many errors! So sorry I will change those later!
It's complete but I might make a sequel and yes I know it needs lots of improvement. Wich kind of improvement grammar or storyline, or both?
4483695 please make a sequel and you need to improvement on both
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Mostly grammar, but I felt you could have included more baby related scenes.
4483695
Always both. No matter the quality of the before, always seek to raise the quality after.
I say write a very long story as well with lots of chapters, it really helps the writing quality, if you need ideas massage me, maybe we will do a colab
4483790 I agree. The grammar needs some work, but I give a thump up for the idea.
Story was pretty good, actually! But yes, please do proofread your stories a bit before uploading.
Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Please do more!
I wish that Button had been magically transformed into a foal, because I would have died from the Diabeetus induced from his cuteness.
Not bad. but as others have pointed out you need to work on your grammar. There's a lot of errors.
Also, it does seem like Button accepted everything really quick.
It was an alright story but I'd suggest getting an editor first.
I'm sooo sorry on grammar and spelling on this, I'm writing on a iPad so my fingers always slip!
I notice quiet a few errors, but the story was very good
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4485441 That would be adorable
talk about dedicated to her craft..
Well, i have edited the writing a bit, but its still a work in progress so please do tell me where any of the errors i didn't notice. Also i have edited the very end a bit so please read that if your interested. Another announcement is that i am planning to write another story like this, possibly a sequel, but im not completely sure yet. Hope fully it will have more chapter and better writting.
4527147 I'd like to see a sequel to this, if it's not too much to ask of course.
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Question, do you have Microsoft word?
>>blackdragonepic I would recommend OpenOffice, because it is free and good, and supports the relevant word processing tasks like spell and grammar check, as well as comments and tracking changes, which are some of the most important editorial features.
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Well, I did write this story on my iPad, but a barely ever do that. Yes I do have Microsoft, I do use it for most things.
Here to announce that I WILL be making a sequel to this, in a few weeks. Just letting you know that I promise you there won't be as many errors and it will probably have more than one chapter. Hope to hear what you think of my next story!
Very cute story...I like it! Wanna see a cute picture as a reward of a good story? (don't worry i'm no troll and I'm harmless)
4483404 Hey I could show you a pic Maybe I can help
Thanks! I would love to see the picture!
4833235 I can't wait.
Out of couriosity, how long after this fic does the sequel take place?
God, I'm an idiot! Sorry to disappoint you but sometimes I get really excited and say something that might not just happen like that but I promise for real this time at one point there will be a sequel or another chapter. Also at some point I'm going to start writing a story about the cmc's but I can't promise any time soon. So sorry again, hopefully I will be writing soon though.
5061698 I vote for a sequel, seeing as it would seem odd to have a fic marked "complete" be updated with a new chapter.
4999579 I would love to see the picture!
5085255 This is in a separate account I created for purposes so here it is.
http://mlpcutepic.deviantart.com/art/Button-s-Roleplay-482513569
also it has no relation to the story but its still cute.
5085579 awwww' thanks, it's so cute!
5089186 Your welcome
5085579 Indeed it is. Heck, it could probably be used for a sequel to this fic.
5210446 That is up to the original Writer of this fic to try and she )or he) is more than welcome to expand on the story
5210799 Indeed. Though, there is such a thing as an unofficial sequel or continuation. Of course, if you don't want to write it, you don't have to.
Write what you want to write.
5210826 I'll be more than happy to allow someone else to write my ideas and expand on them. I do have many padded stories along with what you saw
5210853 I think one day I will do a story based on one of your pieces of fanart. I must say, you have some very interesting pieces.
5214364 Hold on... are you checking "Mlpcutepic" on da?
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5214637 Okay nice thanks. Yeah I do a lot of crazy stories in many ways. Both sad, happy and Sad/Happy
Good job Sweetie! You gave Button a neurosis!
IS button mash OWNED by hasbro?
Ok so I know I was saying I would make a sequel, well that dosent seem to be happening.
however, anyone is welcome to continue this story in a sequel as long as you do the following : button has to actually turn into a baby and whoever writes the story has to show it to me.
Thanks have a fun time writing.
4552585 Dude! im writting another story and finished it on Microsoft word. i tried copying and pasting it on to my new story but it wont work! Arrgggh! what am i supposed to do?!
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Ok, lets first calm down. I don't know why it you have been unable to copy and paste it from a word document and into a won't help the situation.
1) try doing it again (possibly with a different story) and maybe try copy and pasting in a small chunk to see if you can get it to work period. I recently tried to copy and paste something in and I had no trouble with it.
2) if that does not work, try creating a blank document and copy pasting it from the current document to that one, it could be that your computer simply doesn't want to copy and paste for some reason. (I don't know why but at least you know it's your actual computer)
3) You might be able to upload it to Gdoc and them import it to FimFic from there.
4) Try googling it "why won't my computer let my copy and paste to a webpage" or "why won't microsoft office". chances are someone else had this problem as well.
Get back to me on how these work!
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Thanks for helping me but the first two wont work! how do you upload something on to Gdoc? That may work. Thanks!
5566503
hey, it looks like the Gdoc worked. I guess i will have to use that from now one. Thanks alot!
5555065 Hm, I think I could make a sequel where Sweetie Belle turns Button into a foal. It seems like the kind of thing she would do.
It'd only be for one day of course.