This takes place after "Pinkie Pride".
Pinkie and Cheese Sandwich have made the biggest party ever in Ponyville for Rainbow Dash. But after the party, Pinkie wants to get to know Cheese better, so she asks him to stay. He accepts, but Pinkie realizes Mr. and Mrs. Cake have to leave the next day, and she must babysit Pound and Pumpkin Cake. Luckily for her, Cheese wants to help, and everything goes great, until Pumpkin Cake accidentally shoots them with magic.
Contains diapers, diaper usage, shipping, babysitting, and cuteness.
A special thanks to SuperPinkBrony12 for the inspiration!
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This is so adorable. You did a really good job with this idea.
there's no way a dumb baby can do that
I feel like I've read what your whole story was going to be like in just the description alone. Maybe if you didn't have the past where they turned into babies, and left it as a surprise, it would seem more enticing.
dafuq did I read? still, this was cute!
5362888 Babies aren't dumb. They're learning.
5363165 Dumb = state of not knowing things. since they're babies, they don't know a lot of things yet. so, they're dumb
5363223 That doesn't necessarily mean babies are dumb. They're actually a lot smarter than you'll give them credit for. They just view the world a bit differently from adults.
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There's a difference between "ignorance" and "stupidity"
Ignorance is not knowing things.
Stupidity is a failure to utilize what you do know to make logical deductions when confronted with a new situation outside of your knowledge.
Babies are far from stupid, they're just ignorant. The speed at which they learn is proof enough of that.
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I'm glad you think so, but thank you for the idea.
5364556 You're welcome.
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I'm glad you think so.
5364560 and im glad your welcome for me giving you the thoughts lol...
Thanks for a fun and cute read! The only major suggestion I would make is to watch out for misplaced commas. There were many instances where you placed them outside the quotation marks, or added them even when you had other types of punctuation.
But seriously, hopefully we see some more Cheese Sandwich action in Season 5!
5375359 I hope so as well. I mean, they're bringing back both Maud Pie and Coco Pommel, so why not bring back Cheese Sandwich too?
5375546 Very true. I heard news that they are going to do something special with their 100th episode, so Cheese Sandwich might make an appearance there. We can hope!
5375555 I think they said that was going to involve the background ponies and Cheese Sandwich isn't a background pony. Though, I do think that the background ponies should have a different episode to themselves. After all, the 100th episode should be symbolic and mean something.
5375660 Of course. ^_^ I guess we'll have to just wait and find out what they decide to do.
5364207 agreed, babies know more than you realize.
Cute story, different in ways than other stories.
So... cute
Pinkie took it way easier than I thought she would
And there's a song from 'Phineas and Ferb' I think this best fits this
Great to be a baby
5664855 Well, she is somewhat childish at heart.
Do yell at them, they deserve it
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They got yelled at by Pinkie, who they were afraid to make cry. I think they got what they deserved.
Why was mr. Cake such an asshole?
5987082 I don't think he was intentionally trying to be rude, Pinkie Pie did promise to foalsit the twins before she brought Cheese Sandwich home. A promise was a promise.
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I've been looking for a pic for this fic! Thanks!
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Don't worry, I asked.
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I'm like lightning!
6621713 Yep. Thinking about a sequel for this story.
6621718 Maybe Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich become adult foals?
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That's not exactly what I had in mind. I'll tell you through PM for the safety of idea thieves.
6669630 Alright.
Very cute. I liked how you played on how erratic a young unicorn's magic could be to make this story work. I'd imagine a lot of foals would like it if the giants they see as their parents, friends, and/or caretakers would be if they were just like them. This ambition could easily allow them to haphazardly use magic to make it happen. Especially since magic in the MLP universe seems to focus a lot on mental concentration. :)
It's been really enjoyable connecting the dots with all of your works so far. Each tale has a way of building upon itself in some sort of way. In particular with Pinkie Pie. Her happy-go-lucky spirit is very well portrayed through this work.
The reluctance of Cheese Sandwich was also well done. It felt natural. His growing comfort in the situation also didn't appear forced, which is a big bonus for stories of this nature. You have a real knack for presenting this sort of content in a favorable way that shows how it is a part of someone instead of the bulk of an individual's life.
**Fangirl screaming** PINKIE AND CHEESE AS BABIES ARE SO KAWAII