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It is done....
Good lord, what was I smoking when I wrote this???
Yup. I doomed myself.
Have at thy commenters. Show no mercy.
529402
the phrase is "have at THEE"
So. Much. Capslock.
In all honesty though, I enjoyed this so far. Trans-Molestia is always fun.
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529493 The best bucking thing ever!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!
Huh. Celestia is badass.
"I'm a freakin' badass!"
Had no idea what was happening and loved it.
"May God have mercy upon thy soul, for I know I am certainly going to hell for this."
I wouldn't worry about that. Hell's not so bad. It's actually a pretty neat place. I mean, even the front door looks awesome:
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As for the story, it was a bit weird, but I can appreciate the effort that went into writing this.
Princest is wincest, if only because they have startlingly good chemistry and are the only ponies that could ever stay with one another. Immortality sucks.
So, uh, interested to see where this goes?
i feel terrible for even reading this...much less finding any enjoyment is it...
i guess continue?
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Doh!
Leave it to me to make a mess of things.
Aye... Oh well.
529639 I got a better picencrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRvithMKHzKWiRGue2Xl4049lLYTKl-F6UUfA8rFunN-Jd7oW_7HQ
Virotox: Doh... Leave it to me to make a mess of things.
Aye....
EchotheWolf: Glad you enjoyed it. It isn't the most glamorous thing, far from it. Quite frankly, I am waiting for the critics to barge into the door and yammer about all this chapter's misgivings.
Belove: Niether do I. To be honest, the last part of the Rapetestia was completely random.
Just popped into my head. Originally it was going to be much more detailed. Buuuut I decided to hold back to be a tease.
For example? There was going to be oral. I am holding that down for later however. Can't give it away all at once.
Bloodpool: ... Yeah... I can see that.
Of course, this is the first long term fanfic that I have written.
Surprisingly decent at that. Weird? Yes. Awesome? Mmmph, not quite. Unique? I have yet to see Molestia do in her sister THAT way, other than a few odd stories here and there.
That_one_guy: I suppose.
Baronvonkame: You think? Try being the sick basterd that wrote the damn thing in the first place.
To phrase it properly: A mess.
That is what this fic embodies.
A horrible mess gone catastrophically wrong.
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... Should I take this as good news or bad news?
Well, I don't really have anything against Princest. The picture however hinted towards foalcon, which I kinda don't agree with. Gonna read because a) it's not long and b) that one guy is okay with it
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: Yeah! I have no idea what's happening anymore!
Good Lord, what were you smoking when you wrote this???
Cos I want some.
I really, in all honesty, had no freaking clue what was happening through the whole story. At all.
There might have been a plot in there somewhere, maybe even a good and well thought out one...
But to me, Celestia was just murderin' and rapin' as she does.
Keep up the...something...work. I was going to use good but didn't because you are adamant you are going to hell.
...
...
*Gestures with hand* ...Go on...
BeezelPony: It was the only one that I could find that related to the subject material. It did not cross my mind that foalcon would be induced.
My sincere apologizes.
Belove: I know... The plot is hidden, and frankly I am killing for a beta reader.
Another thing, the plot hasn't truly started yet. That is going to really get going on in the first chapter.
This is just a prologue.
Molestation nation!
Foalcon? sounds mildly like a star trek reference, or a foal convention. Try Floali. It's foal and loli together in a way that (sorta) makes sense. Or Floli, or foaloli, or a few others I came up with not 10 minutes ago but despite the fact that I've never heard them before seem like obvious references...
Anyway, I don't get why any of this would have anything to do with that... Their all adult ponies it's just that princess molestia is on a rape and murder bender. ANYWAY, I think we're going to figure out what exactly is going on with the whole "reasoning" behind molestia's actions cause it sounds like she's pissed about something!
OMG! lol I feel so stupid! it's RIGHT in front of me! It's a god damn nightmare! A dream! A fantasy while Celestia sleeps (or Luna maybe but the short description says Celestia having urges and unnatural dreams or something like that.) Next chapter probably going to have her waking up horrified or possibly embarrassed by Luna shaking her awake.
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Waiting for the sequel
529770 OMFG BACON GIVE IT TO MEEE!!
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529848 Awesome possum dude.Nice touch!eu5.memecdn.com/headshot_o_300020.gif
I have no idea what I just read, but I am very interested and don't understand why.. I have no urge to clop nor any other related feeling...
Umm.... more?
...my mind is so full of fuck but I have no regrets.
I read this and I regret nothing.
Dear god...
Why?
Do you like Mmmmm bananas?
>>Totalolness ... You have found out our secret plot.
You must be eradicated. The secret must not be compromised.
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Have fun with Pinkie Pie and Gummy!
Ay, yo, nigga, dis shit's fuckin' kawaii.
Okay, no, but seriously, that was pretty funny. For how well you wrote the description, I was a little surprised to see quite a few grammatical errors, but hey, it made me laugh, so mission accomplished. I eagerly await to fap unneccessarily hard to your next chapter.
823984 Care to highlight them for me?
I rather do without them.
Anyway, 2nd chapters is about quarter of the way finished, not sure when I will finish it, what with me procrastinating.
823994
I'd be more than happy to, my good man. I know that procrastination feel, so no worries.
Well this is...
Odd...
I'm confused...
865466 Don't worry. It will make sense on... When it is updated at the very least.
865511
Alrighty then....
When will that be for curiosity's sake?
Updates, plz?
so your a member of the Celestia X Luna shipping group, but didn't add this to it? is it not luna x celestia? tell me how dark it is, if it is to include rape or anything like that i think i will create a "dark" folder for it. ummmmm, i don't want to add it for you because you might have your reasons not to have added it already. PM me if you want to share something that would be a spoiler, but help me categorize this story :)
Is this story complete? The status is "Incomplete" but your first comment says "It is done".
Either way, it had been placed on my Read Later list
1683338 Nope. But I am stuck on the part of how to get Celestia proceed with waking up for the day and contemplate the nightmare that was this chapter. (Spoiler: This is a dream chapter. Essentially, Celestia conflicted with guilt over her sister's banishment. A LOT of guilt I should mention. And to add to this mess, Celestia starts to feel some "odd" emotions for Luna. You know, your typical love emotions, such as butterflies fluttering in the stomach, heart leaping, admiration, all without actually knowing that it is love till one puts two and two together and BAM! The revelation that they love Y hits them with the force of a freight train.
As for what Celestia loves about Luna, I am making that up as I go, taking off from other stories that have these two shipped. Ultimately though, I plan on making this more than just a simple clop fic. I want to expand upon this relationship, take it to new heights.... Though admittedly, I know little of when using shock value to draw an audience in, then following that up with some WHAM chapter.
There is a problem though.
I have the scenes all mapped out in my head, but I have no idea how the reader will interpret what I write. What will they see? Not to mention, making my own personalities for these two unique to this story is proving to be challenging. The story just doesn't seem to flow naturally when I write it out. It all seems forced and trite, similar to those garbage novels that you would probably find behind in the back of a bookstore.
Oh sure, I can hit the start line with a good onetwo punch, but forget any follow up chapters after the fact.
Not to mention all the damn distractions of daily life, such as Dead Frontier, school and reading all the other fanfiction on this site alone.
I'm not sure what this is, but i'm definitely keeping an eye on this. It made me laugh uncontrollably for several minutes.
any chance for an update
?
? (unless its homework or just plain work 
)
i know i liked what you map out for the story but take your time and not force it out due to the fact that whats the point of writing for the sake of writing when you are not having fun
hmmmmm... personally I'd just wing-it but that's just my dull opinion, although it has worked for me before.... don't know bout you though so I rest my case (actually I don't rest my case because its invalid and chaotic, ALL HAIL CHAOS ALL HAIL DISCORD MUWAHAHAHAHA)
2147995>>2504611 The story is being rewritten.
At its current state, the story is... Well, garbage.
It is being reworked slowly, but it is moving forward.