On what was supposed to be a special Hearts n' Hooves day for two pairs of lovers, the unthinkable happens. Tragic events have taken both the lives of Octavia Philimarica and Lyra Heartstrings, leaving nothing but an empty void for both Bon Bon and Vinyl Scratch, who only have each other to comfort in this most dire of circumstances.
All is not lost though. The death which has befallen them can be reversed. However, the spell that can be used for the revival for both of the comatoste mares is new and unknown.
If the rescue of both mares fail, both Bon Bon and Vinyl face the very real possibility of joining their pride in eternal slumber. Despite this, even if they have to die to breath life back into those who they love, they will fight till both mares breath again.
Rate T for possible sexual references and vivid body transformation
Bah, no pre-reader for you at the moment.
Doesn't help the fact that the word program on my tablet doesn't have a
spellcheck. Grammar nazis, you may begin bombardment on the scars that mar this story.
Let em have it.
This sounds an excellent story! And I'll be sure to point out any big errors, but only in a constructive manner of course. :)