The short version: Both Lance and his Shining Armor figurine are struck by lighting, and not of the random sort either it seems. Instead of burning the lad into a crisp, he was burnt into a crisp AND smacked landed in a form that he is familiar with. No, he doesn't become Shining Armor dear reader, for Celestia knows even that range of stupidity has 'probably' been done to death.
*Hint hint, We are looking at you Pinkie Guy.*
Rather, he has found himself in his own personified pony OC, Primary Lance. And what more, it seems that Shining Armor himself has been zapped into this dimension! How is anyone's guess at the moment; but for now, Lance has to deal with the Captain of the Royal Guard, all the while continuing on in his daily life, even if he is now in an earth pony form of his own persona, (which in that case, pray dear readers, pray; for the end is neigh) all the while trying to keep the both of them intact, avoid being dissected and rammed by roves of fans and avoid pissing of the wife of said Captain.
No way could anything go possibly wrong!
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No really, we really mean it. ABSOLUTELY NOTHING WILL SURELY GO WRONG. NOTHING!!!
Rated T for randomness and inevitable foul but rather tame language and action. Also pancakes, we do not know why pancakes, but it surely shall come in handy later. Practice, Practice, PRACTICE!!! Rating is subject to change.
NOTICE: PDP PP has now hijacked the server world. "You are on the way to destruction make you're time... Ha ha ha."
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*tries to hold laughter in.........fails* BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! I love this story its so bucking funny! :) Keep going!
1375725 Good to know my humor isn't so dry and stale... Speaking of which, I just found out my sanvich has mold growing on the inside.... Bleh.... I have no idea how they managed to fuck that up.... Tastes rotten......
Should be ATEM not ATAM
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You must be silenced....
On a serious note, I am surprised that anyone actually figured that out.
might as well fav, seems good enough.
.... Where did all those thumb downs come from?
Ugh.... I think my spark just died....
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Probably because of everything that came before that line. The wall of text in italics, followed by the wall of text in bold made it difficult to read through, and I honestly just skipped the entire first half of the chapter. You need to remove the italics from the first part, and probably just remove the bold part entirely, because that entire part didn't make any sense.
Other than that, I like the idea behind the story, so I look forward to the second chapter.
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I really reaalllllllly don't want to click the upvote box, in order to preserve THE BALANCE, but the POWER OF LAUGHTER COMPELS ME!
This. Is. Pure. Distilled. Hilarity. NOT MEDIOCRITY! You have now, officially, received SCI's invisible metamaterial seal of APPROVAL for your EXCELLENT work!
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.... Are you suuuuuure that you haven't been on drugs on the past six to twelve hours?
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Well, that would all depend on your definition of "drugs." Do you mean "hallucinogens" or "stimulants" like... well... idk... or do you mean (in my malapropism of a certain famous actor) "Immonadrug. Itsacalled SCIENCE"
The latter, perhaps. Certainly not the former.
I'm a little disappointed this hasn't been updated yet.
You can thank the "PonyEarthverse" for that. They more or less destroyed what was once an interesting and original idea.
Still, even if it is an very much overused trope by now, it would have still been interesting to see here - before "PonyEarth" I always liked to read these stories. I liked the C-Bureau reference, by the way.
2187520 Not destroyed, merely overused. Most avenues that could be taken with the idea have already been done.
All but one needs to do is find an original twist to screw into it and breath new life once again.
2187595 Actually, it seemed like all "PonyEarth" stories took more or less the same route, and a lot of possible outcomes and twists haven't been used yet.