Rainbow Dash can't take it any longer. She can't feel the love of her friends, she can't feel the love of her family, she can't sleep. There is only darkness. With her girlfriends shotgun in her hand, she takes a walk to finally put her mind to rest.
On the 24th of July, the first chapter was edited by Lunalicorn! Whii!
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This seems interesting. I want to read it, due in no small part to my liking of the song for which it is named.
It would be nice if you changed the story to complete as it is complete.
Awesome.
4420795 : Yeah, sorry about that...I forgot to press "Save"...
4420805 : Spank you!
And here I was expecting a new chapter. You know, this is the kind of thing for which one (here meaning you) should post a blog that is tagged with this story.
Awesome story! Added it to my favorites
4458310 Thanks! That's great to hear :)
This is so beautiful in how moving this is. The first part was my favorite but I really enjoyed the story as a whole and thought it was very emotional. Also, the lyrics to "The Blues" were really amazing too. Thank you for the great read!! :)
4526317 Wow... thank you! That comment went straight into!
And its great to know you liked the blues since that only was my plan b. :D
and thanks for the fav!
I've got to admit, I was wondering how the Hell a *lot* of the logistics worked there. Those kind of distracted me from a lot of the story itself, though I got the emotional end of it. The emotion works out well, but you might want to work on AJ's accent too. The "yer" instead of "you" was a particularly tricky part to read through.
Good story, I'll come back after the revisions have gone through.
4533664 Thanx! My plan is to get some of my friends to proofread the story for those kind of things...which means, revisions are in development hell... but as soon as the other story I'm working on is complete... then NOTHING WILL STOP THE SPANISH INQUISITION!
try that one in the meantime. 's called "bride of sparkle"
however, the 'yer's will not be gone. Its a darling of mine, reminds me of the scouse.
While this WAS well written, and I'm glad it ended happily, I can't bring myself to fave it.
8106718 I understand. Thanks for reading.
Even though this is sad and moving, I lost it when I heard why scootshad the shotgun