[light-shipping][not-insanely-dark]
When Rainbow Dash takes Scootaloo on a trip to show the filly her newest stunts, Scootaloo feels like it's the best day ever. But when a harmless action goes horribly wrong, what kind of emotions will bubble to the surface?
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Scoot x AB (light shipping)
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Header image is made by me: http://r-b-d.deviantart.com/#/d4z75wr
Story inspiration from: http://naterrang.deviantart.com/art/Loyalty-289642247
The guy is a really awesome artist, and has helped me with creating the story as well! You should check him out for sure!
Chapters (5)
My attempt at writing. This is the first story I've ever written, so constructive criticism would be helpful.
Also, the story is completed already, I will be uploading a new chapter every other day until they're all up here.
Beautifully written. Dash's wing breaking felt a little. . . contrived? But otherwise, it's great.
Awesome start!
I can't wait too see what happens! :D
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I know, it feels a bit forced, but the later chapters are a lot better (in my opinion :P)
720882
Glad you liked it!
I'm really liking this story. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters, and the bit about Dash's wing snapping (or breaking) didn't seem too forced to me.
Ponies are made of cotton candy and bubblegum! Except for Rainbow Dash. Her wings are made of tissue paper.
Despite the extremely tired and worn out story device in which Rainbow Dash hurts a wing, I'll be following this.
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That's the part bugging me the most, as well. Thing is, I needed it to actually get the story to move where I need it to. The other chapters are less of a cliché, I promise
"The Applebloom would often find herself ending up at this particular part of the apple farm."
"The Applebloom would often find herself"
"The Applebloom"
Da fuck is this?
727035
Thank you for pointing it out so delicately
I must've missed it when proofreading for the seventh time or so.
Second chapter!
Even though still somewhat cliché-y, a lot less than the ending of the first chapter
i like this story
keep it up!
Chapter 3 is out! And it's a large one
(and I just noticed the way I made my description might make it seem as if it's a ScootxDash ship... Didn't see that one coming...
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Awww CliffHangers! I hate you so much!
I hope RD is okay and this is awesome! Keep up the good work. 
741937
''I hope RD is okay''
Maybe.
Maybe not.
Chapter 4! Questions answered, but questions posed as well!
Only one chapter left. Saving best for last, of course.
751450 awrggghhhhh....u can has all my internets just put up teh next chapter.
Edit: do you mind checking out The Lost Wonderbolts and MAWRD and making some cover art for me please? im a terrible artist...
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Sorry, I don't do requests. Even if I would, I work really slow
752777 do you know anypony who does?
Chapter 5! And hereby, my first ever written story is complete.
~yay
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I hope that, whoever has read this, has enjoyed doing so. Who knows, I might write more in the future
Awesome
That was so sweet and i like how you added the name of the story in the ending!
I have to say this story made me cry many manly tears. 
Awesome job! 
Oh my gosh!!!! This is genius!!!!!
Take my 2 thumbs, 5 stars and 5
and leave me with my manly tears 
Needs more views, you are an amazing writer; don't stop. Oh, and the 'cliché-y' thing? Don't worry, it adds to the story, to the characters.
I like it!
I I I
I love you. Nothing more can capture this emotion
Thank you
*holds back manly tears*
That was wonderful *sniff* my fave CMC ship AND Rainbow and Scootaloo having a pseudo-sister moment... thank you for writing this!
This is EPIC.
Nice story so far!
One thing though:
"cootaloo couldn't believe her ears. Rainbow dash needed her help?"
^ missing the S
Wait, what about Scootaloo's home situation?
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A story for another time!
im getting the I shouldn't be alive vibe here
good story cant w8 for more
cute