With tear filled eyes, Scootaloo runs away from Ponyville after Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle reveal their cutie marks.
The orphan makes a discovery that will change her life forever, within the depth of the Everfree Forest...
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One of the more beautiful things I have read so far and truly a story worth of my and so many other times. I love it and I'm so happy for Scootaloo and Dash. Tears were shredded
Awesome story Nice idea making RD and Scootaloo sisters. Fav and watching
I remember this one... it took me a bit to place it, but I've read it before. I get the feeling it'll be one I'll come back to again at some point as well.
Wow I loved that story it was full of emotion! ^.^
I'm depressed now
want to read more
Le' DAAWWWH
Excited.. wondering what's gonna happen next...
oh and... AJ + Fluttershy pairing?
I havE NEVER seen that one before!
Anyway, I can't wait to read more!
~Rosalynn~
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The FlutterJack / AppleShy pairing occurred in a fanfic I had going a while ago but never published, or finished. Not even sure if I still have it on my computer.
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It's not the first time I've seen it, Lunafyre -- or whatever name she goes by these days, since I think I saw something about her changing her name on Deviant Art -- had it happen, though it was something of a rebound since the fic she wrote was Twi and Dashie becoming lovers as a continuation of Ebon's In the Rain, both of them were a bit heartbroken that Twi and Dash were lovers since they both had loved Dash until then.
The story plot thickens even more
"Mmm, Pizza... so warm and gooy... mmmm"
LOL nice.
Enjoyin' the story thus far...
Scoots and Star are awesome together. <SO AWESOME) one might say
haha!
excited for more :3
~Rosalynn~
sir...... you have earned your self a favorite
ONE WORD = perfect
Spectrum? Spectrum who? Is he another rainbow pony too?
712283 Spectrum has a cobalt blue coat and the same rainbow mane and tail. Cobalt and Dash met and fell in love in the 'fanon' where I had AJ and Fluttershy fall in love with each other. Rarity met the stallion of her dreams, but he died protecting her from a monster in the Everfree Forest. Twilight, well, she met a stallion, but he turned out to be a monster in disguise (the same one that killed Rarity's coltfriend). Pinkie Pie had a stallion and a mare trying for her attention, but in the end, those two fell for each other, but remained good friends with Pinkie.
I no longer have any of those stories, which is a shame because I would have loved to clean them up and post them.
What...?
WHAT?!?
NO I DEMAND MORE!! *slams hooves on desk*
THIS. IS. NOT. OVER!!
Oh... new story? Ok.. when?
~Rosalynn~
Wonderful story. I'm really looking forward to the sequel.
Interesting story. Kinda disappointed that she left though.
985021 There is a continuation of the story called Beyond Equestria. Slowly working at it... when my brain is working right at least.
MUST YOU TORMENT ME WITH THE AWESOMENESS OF PIZZA imma go get some
this was a very very good storry and the idea of her wing beeing overly large is quite interesting i hope you dont mind if i incorperate the idea into one of the new fanfictions im working on. i have many written but havent published then. i am actually expecting an answer, not meaning to sound rude. if you do take more than a week to answer i will just use it. sorry scoots is my fav the idea of rainbowdash not being a natural rainbow is cool but one of my unpublished fanfic "Natural Rainbow' is kind of based off of her being a natural rainbow maned gal. personally i love spectrum and look forward to this new story. i am very disapointed that moon and scoots are seperated tho any way i wish you luckk on your ficture
1014199 feel free to use the idea.
I'm glad you enjoyed this cute little slice of life fic
i still have 7 more chapters to go?wtf
1455678 Well, the original story was just chapter 1, but I write the other chapters out of boredom.
No sequel? Why? You... ... PROMISED.
FLUTTERSHY SMASH LYING AUTHOR!!!!
I this
So, just out of curiosity are you ever going to put beyond Equestria on here? I've been waiting for a while now wondering if the sequel would ever make it onto your fimfiction page,
Cute and hearth warming
You really should make more stories like this one
And you just got one happy new follower
Now i need to find the right button to press
that is all i can say
Will there ever be a sequel to this, or is it just done?
Will their ever be a sequel to this story? Because it’s just to good to leave on a cliffhanger like this. You know what I mean?
What? How can 2 ponies have the same cutie mark? I’m a bit confused. But great story btw!
*tummy rumbles* Oops! All this talk about pizza has made me hungry!
2 months? How? The vomiting only started that morning! But, get ready for 7 or, in pony terms, 9 months of torture, Rainbow Dash! >:) (Idk, really. I remember my mom saying I used to kick a lot, but seriously, idk.)
I think her mom is a pegasus too.
Brother in law, not step brother :)
And wait, Dash’s married now? Well, that was sudden.
Already? My aunt and uncle, who had a baby recently didn’t announce the name until a month after he was born! I guess Equestria and my country are very different, although I remember only 2 ponies who were (somewhat) from my country, appearing in season 6.
This is a great story so far, I ho-
THIS A LETTER TO PONY FROM PRINCE OF YAK YAKS ENJOY STORY. YAKS NEED MOARRR!!!!!! PONY NO GIVE YAK MORE STORY, THEN YAK SMASH PONY!!!! NOW PONY GO TELL APPLE JACK TO MAKE A YAK EMOJI FOR APPLE DEVICES!!! NOW!!
Sorry, the crazy prince of
AfghaniYakyakistan took over my device, and began typing. What I was saying is that I hope to see more added to this story.interesting end to the first chapter
beautiful
oh is Luna going to freak out by seeing her son?