Shotgun Blues

by the frank

The Blues

Shotgun Blues
by Rainbow Dash

In the night, my soul hurts and I tremble
The end is near for me
In the night, my soul hurts and I tremble
The end is near for me
Tryin purple pills and liqour
but there is no remedy

If you got nothing to offer
there's no use in playing the game
Whatever play or gambit
I will loose all the same
I have walked along with the devil
But my soul was tough to sell
Ain't got cash, do have a shotgun
Gonna blow myself to hell

Got my share of mistakes
Got nothing going my way
when there's nothing you can do 'bout it
there is nothing more to say
I have walked along with the devil
But my soul was tough to sell
I made it as cheap as I could
but it still stays on the shelf

My head's been cut of my body
and my body's going it's own way
My head's been cut of my body
And it don't want me to stay
As I finally pull the trigger
I will let it drift away

Author's Note:

if anyone would care to actually write music for this it would be awesome. just make it slow.

Comments

[CaptainSanchez]

And here I was expecting a new chapter. You know, this is the kind of thing for which one (here meaning you) should post a blog that is tagged with this story.

[mlplover17]

Awesome story! Added it to my favorites

[the frank]

4458310 Thanks! That's great to hear :)

[the frank]

4526317 Wow... thank you! That comment went straight into!
And its great to know you liked the blues since that only was my plan b. :D
and thanks for the fav!

[Shrinky Frod]

I've got to admit, I was wondering how the Hell a *lot* of the logistics worked there. Those kind of distracted me from a lot of the story itself, though I got the emotional end of it. The emotion works out well, but you might want to work on AJ's accent too. The "yer" instead of "you" was a particularly tricky part to read through.

Good story, I'll come back after the revisions have gone through.

[the frank]

4533664 Thanx! My plan is to get some of my friends to proofread the story for those kind of things...which means, revisions are in development hell... but as soon as the other story I'm working on is complete... then NOTHING WILL STOP THE SPANISH INQUISITION!
try that one in the meantime. 's called "bride of sparkle"

however, the 'yer's will not be gone. Its a darling of mine, reminds me of the scouse.

[the frank]

8106718 I understand. Thanks for reading.