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Zetriax


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Pinkie Pie has done something she truly regrets. So, she takes matters into her own hooves and sends a message to the Princess detailing why she has done what she has. This is her story...

Reading by Robipony here.
Reading by Flera Vox here.
Reading by JayCee here.
Reading by Dusky Novel here.

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This, in a terrifyingly twisted way, is beautiful.

Not bad. Better than most killer Pinkie stories.

What!? wow well its about time we had one that wasn't a complete copout like most cupcakes sequels or alt endings are.

Among the better kill fics thats for sure. I give it a like and a fave. Very nice

Love it! Have an upvote and a moustache. :moustache:

I thought this had something to do with cupcakes, but I was wrong. great story my Dude

This just... Holy crap man.:derpyderp2:

Definately one of the better "crazy" stories. One typo though,

Before her could scream, I slashed through his neck so hard ...

otherwise, great writing

4363574 Okay, thanks. I'll fix that.

That’s when she appears. My other side

Why does everyone say she has an other side? That one time when her mane got flat doesn't meant she has one

Very good! Kept me interested and made me want to keep reading till I finished it. I love the way you pulled this together.

4371283 In this sense, it doesn't necessarily mean when her mane went flat. I'm using it to refer to the alter ego she has created to personify her buildup of guilt that has led to murderous acts. That is her "other side". It's her guilty conscience.

4361733 good, but not as good as secret life of rarity. (Don't get me wrong, great character analysis fic, but I prefer SLoR)

4632992 I've actually never read that one. I'll check it out. How else am I gonna raise my standards?

4634546 it was one of [said authors (bronywriter) ] first fics, and it was really the starting point of his *qoute* *unqoute* career on this site. I bet you could take a lot away from it of you read in depth enough.

So... Beautiful...

It is a good story. I like who Pinkie choose to kill the party. It is better then the Cupcake route that a lot of people like to take. :twilightsmile:

EDIT: It also kind of reminds me of Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde.

5553171 You do inform the writers that you did readings of their stories right? Sorry silly question.

Good fic. Honestly.

5587294 Yeah, I always send them a PM with a link to the video. One of my own personal rules. :raritywink:

Robipony brought me here. Intense story, Zetriax. Very good premise and actualization!

I love this so much

5651129 Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

This is very good. good job! five out of five mustaches! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I am definitely not crying!
:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

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