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Twilight Best Pony


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This story is a sequel to A broken Sun


It’s been three months, dear sister, three months since you left. Where could you be? I know you’re out there, I know it. Your most loyal guard and his armies have been scouring Equestria, looking for you, sister. Please, return and we can repair what has been broken and start over. Every night is a nightmare since you left. This wasn’t supposed to happen like this, please, if you can do one last thing, come back. But we will find you, Celestia, and we will mend our relationships. I’ll see to it that you are retrieved, dear sister. Mark. My. Words.

Edited by: Razalon the Lizardman
Collab with Pvt Caboose

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 27 )

That blank space wasn't there when I last saw this thing...

5386568 No, it isn't. It's at the beginning.

At first i thought this was about the times Luna was Nightmare Moon. Well this is interesting...

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Make sure to tag Broken Sun as the prequel to this one so it'll link back automatically on the sidebar.

Let it begin...

*catches up*

So, Celestia f'd up and then ran off to get *sunglasses* stoned?

For shame, Sunbutt, for shame.

“Twilight, can I ask you a super serious question?”

The question, and the fact that it was Pinkie asking it, caught Twilight off guard for a moment before she turned to her friend and answered with, “Sure, what is it?”

“...If they ever find Celestia, do you think you could ever forgive her?”

Pinkie’s question hit Twilight like a ton of bricks, as well as Applejack and Rainbow Dash who immediately stopped brawling on the floor and looked up at the party pony in shock.

Twilight began sputtering, trying to form a coherent thought, let alone a response. An empty void began forming in her chest. Thoughts about Celestia, what she’d done, and what Twilight thought about her twisted her heart strings. Her emotions ran high and a heavy pressure began to settle in her chest.

It wasn’t until after she managed to work her way out of her heavily emotional stupor that Twilight managed to form a half-hearted response.

“I-I don’t know Pinkie...I-I just don’t know…”

I guess Twilight's half-mumbled forgiveness of Celestia at the end of the last story was just wishful hearing on the part of Luna.

This was pretty cool. I love the way all the reactions are accurate. Excellent job. :heart:

Silently she stared up at the massive mural, slightly awestruck as a small inkling formed in her scattered thoughts. Though it didn’t give her more than a slight feeling about the landmark, it stayed with her.

Something about the tree.

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There was something about that tree she just couldn’t place…

Hmmmm, methinks that Twilight's starting to get unconscious clues (or feelings, if you prefer) about where Celestia is.

Let's hope so.

Yay update! *does happy yes dance*

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oh jeez, i had no idea that you liked this story.

Ooh! Chapter Two is out :pinkiehappy:

Edit: Now that I have read the update, I love the careful foreshadowing you made with the Tree of Harmony mural :twilightsmile:

Cliffhangers make me sick... :pinkiesick:

Although, I must deal with it none-the-less :trixieshiftleft:

Anyways, I did enjoy the story even if the ending left many un-answered questions. :twilightsmile: :heart:

Ack!!! A cliff hanger! Right here of all places!?? WHYYY????? :raritydespair:
On the other note, I really liked the chapter, though I'm saddened by how short it is :fluttercry:
I can't wait to hear/read what happens next!!

When Twilight turned down the next hallway she was met with several ponies. Carelessly, she weaved in and out between all the maids and guards. They stopped in shock at first, then immediately gave chase. Twilight had a slightly crazed giggle as she continued on towards Luna’s office, guards and castle staff hot on her hocks. After what seemed like eons of galloping, she spotted the all too familiar door. With a mad smile, she used her remaining energy to push on.

Oh Twi, even when I'm worried to death about you your still so cute. Excellent chapter and story. :yay:

Me while reading....

"This is getting good...."

The end of the chapter... Let's just go to the next chapter...

It's not yet out... It probably won't take long till the next chapter...

On hiatus?!

Why is the world so cruel!

The Last update was in March 2015
The author was last seen in June 2018
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Not gonna lie, it ain't looking too good.
Shame.
I was quite enjoying this.

I was really enjoying this. To bad it looks like it isn't being updated anymore.

Aw bro noooooo cliffhanger

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