Every story is just a combination of twenty-six letters, all sewn together to form one masterpiece. Aren't words a beautiful thing? And I just so happen to write a lot of them. Like, seriously, more than a lot. However, sometimes, these words I write don't make any sense. So that's why I post them here!
Enjoy my random musings and various experiments in writing!
This story might as well be a box of chocolates, 'cause you don't know what you're gonna get!
This is basically just where I dump whatever drabbles I feel like writing, in addition to stuff I might write for group collabs or random musings and experimentation for headcanon. Like I said, it could be anything and everything. To be a part of this, drop one word prompts in the comments!
Chapters (4)
...All the Yes.
Classic Pinkie
hmmm, i like that word
One word prompt: polydactyl
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OK, so the first thing I need to comment on is that header image. One thing that bugs me, as a reader, as a layout artist, and as a web graphics designer, is when people drop graphics into their stories that assume every reader on the site uses the default 'black text on white background' viewing option. The image you used is black line art on a rectangular white background. On anything other than the white background layout, it looks ugly:
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Now, on to comments on the drabbles themselves:
"Oreos": Nothing really new or inspired here. Just a rehash of the "Luna is a gamer" and "Luna loves Oreos" memes. All in all, really rather pointless.
"Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious": Cute...a little underwhelming, but cute.
"Men": Yeah, this is the kind of thing that needs a little more than a 300-word blurt. The notion of Rarity actually marrying Spike is...deserving of a bit more than a scene of Rarity and Cadance bitching about their husbands. Also, it was just...really dry, with the only real chuckle coming from the part about Rarity's kitchen mishaps. And even then, that's contradicted by canon, where Rarity is shown to be an excellent cook.
"Famous": Pointless. Just...pointless.
Won't be tracking this. Don't let my comments stop you from writing them, this is all entirely my opinion. I just think some of these scenes would be so much better as pieces of an actual story, instead of just random scraps.
4363316 Well, sorry about the whole banner thing, but as for the drabbles -- I kinda just made it like my own Prompt Tag thing. That's all. Sorry if you found 'em pointless or whatever, I worked with what I had. This isn't gonna be a big project or anything anyway, I only made it to kill time.
I admit they're not all great, but no one is perfect.
Wouldn't it be 'Manespray'