Candle Light, a safety inspector from the alicorn homeland, is sent to Ponyville on an important mission to assess Princess Twilight's fire safety regulations.
Pinkie Pie gets the wrong impression.
Hilarity ensues.
This story was written as part of a Rage Reviews contest to see who could write the best story featuring a red-and-black alicorn OC as the protagonist.
Adorable cover art by Enderstorm!
Yes.
I really, really hope that there will be an overabundance of fire related puns.
This. I need more of it.
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ZOMG RED AND BLACK ALICORN U ARE THE WORST AUTHOR EVAR!!!!1
But please continue the story.
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3921069 I think I might be the first one to submit to this contest. It was fun to write
Well she has a point. If you're a sorceress living in a tree, with a fire-breather, you need to make sure he doesn't sneeze too often.
Actually Pinkie, she can go in and tell Twilight what to do now that Twilight's an alicorn.
3921069 Don't worry, it doesn't look like there 'll be any gary stuage.
it was a pleasure to read my good pony. a true pleasure.
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Please tell me there are going to be several fire-related puns. I love puns. Oh! And great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
ZOMG RED AND BLACK ALICORN U ARE THE WORST AUTHOR EVAR!!!!1
But she is still funny, and that's what counts.
Is it selfish that I like to keep reading this simply because I made the cover art?
3938811 Nope. Perfectly understandable
Even if a storm were to set fire to something, the rain would put it out anyway.
3939102 dfat.gov.au/aib/images/australia-topographic-map-960.jpg Please, tell me more.
Famous Last Words...
Oh boy. What is Pinkie Planning with the CMC? It will be one heck of a prank. I feel sorry for Candle Light.
3939508 Not sure I understand. What about Australia?
3942741 Ungodly island destroying firestorms caused, in part, by lightning.
I don't think you have much competition. Firstly it's hilarious, secondly........... The other one is pretty awful.
One of the judges has spoken!
I'll be watching this!
An alicorn homeland? This brings up a wide range of new possibilities and theories for alicorns.
I think I know who would get along with Candle Light and this fic very well.
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I like how you said 'there won't be any JSF famous delays' and it's been 3 weeks since the last chapter.
Still, I'm hardly one to talk.
4090479 I decided to rewrite the third chapter. Then I forgot to write it
I'll get on that soon.
Lolzzzz. Can't wait for next chapter.
why do I think sending a dragon to burn the town will do less damage and prove candle less right?
45 weeks later...
Any progress yet?
4090515 It's been 73 weeks and 6 days.