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It was a normal day in Equestria, and the CMC planned to use it to the fullest, doing what they do best; crusading for their cutie marks, along side their new members. That all change when a mysterious ship crushed never them, and upon exploring the ship, a series of events changed the lives of these six young ponies beyond their wildest dreams. With help of their new friend, the young ponies may make sense out of this, and mayebe, just maybe finally earn what they seek.

Meanwhile, in another part of Equestria. old foe prepared for another attack. Armed with mysterious new weapons and a plan worse then the last, cold this foe finally do what it set out to do? Or would our young poines step up and save all of Equestria?

Note: This will take place within the early days of Transformers Prime, and will features ideas from different forms of the line. It would also features mostly made up Transformers, but with guest appearance by well known characters.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 57 )

Interesting start, though I would suggest getting a pre-reader to iron out the grammar mistakes.

“What? Wouldn’t you given a name?” Cliff jumper asked humorously, which earn him a light backhand from his partner.

What? Weren't you given a name?

, we may have find a storage vessel,

Found.

Other then that an interesting chapter. Looking forward to more!

Interesting...:rainbowhuh: My curiosity demands more!:pinkiehappy:

...Vaguely or completely robotic looking pegacorns?

Just for the 'Oh sh:heart:t!' factor in the CMC having that kind of power?

If you going to us Beast Machines as your bace, then you may want to use animals as your transformations for the CMC. I would go with animals that go with the personality of each them. No hoof animals being that they all can talk and in their minds turning into your neighbor, the cow or donkey, would not be a real transformation. :twilightsmile:

Actually aponyforthebooks, this story take place in the Transformers Prime Universe. But, I'm using elements for all of the shows, and the CMC transform simliary to have their transformed in Beast Machines.

though ur grammar could use work, having a learning disability is not really an excuse...this is what getting an editor is fore, someone to go ever the story and tell u where ur going wrong. oh, and before u go and jump on me for bad grammar (as others have before, believe me) when i write comments, i generally use text talk as its faster and i can get more into these little comment boxes...

Awwwww I was hoping that he would give those buggers a taste of Cybertronian Steel.

God damn the ironic waiting until next chapter to hear the plan. All in all this was a good chapter to read, keep up the good work.

P.S The only time I get to read fanfics is pretty late at night because of school. THIS WAS ONLY EXCEPTION. But I do read them and can't wait for next chapter.

Awwww SHIIIIAAAAAATTT!!!!!!!!!!! It's about to get REAL up in this fic!!!

hmmmn, the CMC should be armed...if they can master their weapon systems...

won-der-full that's it, nothing other to say !:pinkiesmile:

this equestrian mystery has just taken a strange turn for the worst:trixieshiftright:

wouldn't it be awesome if the Autobot CMC went and created a tumblr blog?

4242287 im more concerned about when they get their combat functions activated...the members of the CMC have a rep after all...

4244802 just saying it would be cool the actually see what they're doing and have their story unfold or something like that.

4249826 oh, so ur completely alright with the idea of the CMC having access to Cybertronian weaponry?

4249889 well, aside from the fact that they could potentially burn down all of ponyville, I'm alright with it. besides, they're going to eventually use them anyway for better or worse whether its fighting decepticons or potentially burning the everfree forest. But still, I like the idea of a tumblr blog. don't you think?

will Optimus Prime eventually be greeting the newly transformed hybrid sparklings sooner or later?

So, whats gonna happen to this story?

Please update soon. I like this fanfic...:fluttershysad:

3925404 come on and add more chapters so I can continue reading this story

Can we get pictures of the other Crusaders? Plz.

The grammar is terrible, yet I am drawn to this story. Please make more.

OK I NEED TO SAY THIS AGAIN! HURRY THE F:yay:K UP!!!!!!!!

OK I NEED TO SAY THIS AGAIN! HURRY THE F:yay:K UP!!!!!!!!

I've only read the first few paragraphs and the grammar is already cringe-worthy.
GET AN EDITOR.

i'm reread and dose Dinky some kind of PSD from the changling attack cause that's how it seems

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