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When Starlight Glimmer finds a mysterious item, it sends her, her teacher and her friends to a mysterious new world. Adrift in this new place and changed into something else entirely, the seven mares will need the help of this world residents to find a way home, and to save one of their own when she is taken by aggressive forces for a some purpose.

However, as the group travel this new world, they begin to unravel a mystery, one that if not stop could spell the end, not only to this world, but maybe Equrestia as well.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 22 )

Awesome first chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks

Awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks

What's with the random block of Bold/Italics?

Other than that, pretty good.

7910960 the talics how I usual tell the reader when somepony is merely thinking in instead of talking.

7911507 I was more referencing the entire conversation and actions taking place in the bolded/italicized portion. Starting with "Girls, one question at a time, please," and ending with 'Celestial...please help.' It's several paragraphs worth of bolded/italicized text.

Italicized text for thought isn't a new concept to me. ;)

7913961 Thanks for your help and sorry for the misunderstanding. I think I did that whole change when I was putting the story on the site.

Good chapter, though there were some problems with random tense changes from the past to present and back to the past, and a few typos. Don't have time to point them out now, but I believe one point was when Starlight screamed. It says "WHAT GOING ON," not "WHAT'S GOING ON," as it should. Stuff like that, where spellcheck can't help is scattered throughout.

:twilightsmile:Now for the praise::pinkiegasp: LOOK! A Digimon story that is not about a displaced! (I have issues with the crossovers they do with each other. And too many are just bad.) I love how you had the creator of the device come from Starlight's past, as someone who would have a legitimate argument against her plan. Very clever bit of world-building. Another neat bit was giving Cloudsdale and Ponyville a fledgling electric grid. :twilightsmile:
Kudos, as well, for coming up with a way to get her friends to the castle that isn't overdone.:raritywink: Well, except for the characters. I'm sure they've done this a lot by now.:trollestia:

All in all, I look forward to the rest! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting setup, I see we are ignoring Equestria Girls in this story. I do like the outfits.

Awesome chapter my friend I'll be waiting for more uploads to this story

That was an awesome chapter my friend I'll be waiting for the next upload for this story

Interesting set up so far. Is the Mutant infection based on the X Digivoltion film's X variant Digimon? Also is there a required Digimon series preknowlege for this fiction then or is it beginner friendly? Either way interested in how things pan out from here.

8099408 Yes and no; the mutant digimon are like X-digimon, as they came about because of the state of the digital world, but that's where it ends. A mutant digimon could have a ranch of powers that a non-mutant digimon might not have. And you don't need to have a long ranch of knowledge of digimon as a whole as I would be using element from the media as a whole

8099620 Oh okay then. Thanks. I wish you luck on future writings then.

There will be fan made digimon in this story, right?

Does no found pay attention to the show? They called Starlight the towns FOUNDER, which means she started the town. It didn't exist till she decided to build it.

...I can't help but notice the title. "Digidestiend". I don't think I need to do anything more than point that out.

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Actually, I'm just using a headcanon of mine I began to mark around the start of season six, one which will be revealed later on in the story.

Well at least some Digidestend Digimon from the TV series are going to be their partners.

gotta be honest. love the story so far, but man is it an atrocious read.
get yourself a proofreader/ editor.:eeyup:

Curious to see what happens next.

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