To a mysterious coastline, three dragons awaken with no recollection of their past, the beings that filled it, or how they ended up there.
As simplicity cracks to give way to the true, complex monster beneath, Spyro, Spike, and Toothless must come face to face with their own demons, a world they have been forced to forget, and an evil so ancient, that success might as well be in vain.
Sometimes, all it takes is being estranged to find the true path of attainment.
[Character tags will be added as the story progresses]
Edited by the wonderful Mike Myers
Chapters (1)
Why do I know nothing about this? How can I do my job like this?
I will say one thing:
It's about time.
Nice. This is a fic I've wanted to see for some time, being a fan of all three dragons. Tracking.
I was hoping for something like this.
Lets see where this goes.
wow, a fic with toothless in it? I'm tracking this so hard
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3221970 so am i get your choice of weapon and let hunt the guy who dis liked this i got blue bravior
Well, this looks interesting. There are very few grammatical errors, and the only complaint I have is on the introduction of Toothless (I actually missed it the first time around, and had to reread it
.)
But the story itself is promising and intriguing. We've got three dragons, one who can't talk (Toothless) and one who can't fly (Spike). I'm figuring Spyro's gonna be the de facto leader, since he can do both (and he's a boss
). And then we have the mystery of their predicament - they're on a Skylands-esque floating island, and have selective - and rather weak - amnesia (they have vague recollections of friends, but not how they got here or what happened to them). Who placed them here, and why? Spyro may be a Guardian for his world, but what makes Spike or Toothless so special to join him? And who else might we be seeing in this strange world? (I'm hoping for Temeraire, personally, but that might be a bit less well-known our main dragons
.)
Overall, this story looks great, and I look forward to what you have in store for our three heroes (and us loyal readers).
)
(P.S. This was my first attempt at a "constructive review", I think. Hopefully I didn't come off as being pretentious or ridiculous.
a bit of a slow start with the intro's. I hope you plan on putting Cynder and Gilda in. to McKnight93 the reason spike is in there is simple if you think witch site
your reading on and toothless is there to be a boss in his own right being the only night fury in HTTYD movie or tv series.
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I love it