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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uGjHsLnUO1U. So kik me if you want, I'm Railtaiser.

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It's Hearths Warming Eve and Big Macintosh and his coltfriend Caramel have had a great year. But for Caramel, it's about to get even better.

This festive fiction is my attempt at christmas fluff.

Contains coltcuddling and implied sex.
Cover by Wolferahm.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

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One story ends, and yet another begins. The madness must end.

Lol, wrong holiday?

How did this get more dislikes than likes? It's so sweet.

3710731 Because it's poorly written and it's discussing a controversial topic?

But what do I know?

Keep your hands off Big Mac.:flutterrage: He belongs only to mares and no one else.:eeyup:

3710721 What do you mean wrong holiday?

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I'm sorry you find it to be poorly written. I admit, I could have done better. But I'm not entirely sure what you mean by a controversial topic. If it's the gay marriage, well thats being accepted in a lot of places so it will soon cease to be a controversial topic.

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I think he means that something like this would be more suited to Hearts and Hooves day. I must agree.

3712507 But until then, you're stepping into a minefield on the batlefield of both the "Extremealiberals" and the "Uberconservatives." I, personally, find that this is an abomination to the show's characters (in addition to my distaste of the writing style), but I am neutral of gay marriage.

Well written, cute, sweet, and romantic?! This story was made for me! Don't listen to AwkwardTaco, you did incredible and I want to read more.:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you, it's very kind of you to say so. And may I say, for anthro, your profile is pretty hot. As for AwkwardTaco, he did make some valid points.

Awww, that was really cute. :pinkiehappy:

Your grammar and formatting needs work, but nothing too terrible. Watch the spacing, dialogue punctuation, etc. Also, when you have a character's internal thoughts (such as Big Mac's), either italicize them or add "he thought," etc., like the character was speaking.

My stepfather proposed to my mother on Christmas, so I think using Hearth's Warming Eve was fine. :twilightsmile:

Ignore the downvotes. I can gaurantee that no more than two to three of them are because of how the story was written. This site is full of people who hate M/M while gobbling up F/F... it sickens me, the hypocrisy. :pinkiesick: (To be fair, there are people who hate any same-sex ship on here as well, and I find them equally worthy of a facehoof. :facehoof:) Work on your grammar and writing style in the future and you'll do just fine. :pinkiehappy:

And to the guy who said this is an "abomination," I suppose you'll have to pass over any Dark or AU fic, as well as any fic where a character dies, a non-canon ship is shown, etc. :rainbowlaugh: It's fanon, people! FANON!

Best CaraMac fluff fic I've ever read! It almost made me cry! Oh, wait. It did! Thank you for that! :raritydespair::twilightsmile:

Negative feedback? Lel, I don't give a single fuck. Read it or don't guys, your choice.

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