It's nice when you get to spend time with your couple's family
It's even better when they're happy to do so
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This is a pretty nice story, very cute.
One point of order through:
A pony child is a "foal".
A "foul" is a wrongdoing, particularly when cheating in a sport.
2850647 Mhm, You know I read my stories over like 3 times and still there's typos. FML
Thanks tho, glad you liked it
Awww, what a cute oneshot
I loved how Applebloom asked when Big Mac's going to marry Caramel. That is so, molasses-drippingly sweet
And Caramel being an accepted member of the Apple Family. I absolutely love it
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Shh, don't spoil it for people~
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Oh, I apologise for that. There needs to be a spoiler-block system like on TV Tropes
I can't believe how underrated this story is. You have the most eloquent and lovely to read writing style i've seen on this site in a long, long time. The characters and their relationship felt 'real', not just 'in character' but it really felt like if you'd taken out words like 'Hooves' and 'Stallions' and replaced them with 'Hands' and 'Men.' it would work as a stand alone romantic short story. I really want to write an essay length review but I don't think you'd want to read it, so I'll just end off with saying this is hands down the best fic i've read on the site in eons.
Keep up the amazing work.
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you give far too much credit. There are much greater works than this.
the only difference is that this is a moment. Just a moment. there isn't any need for drama or something like that. Stretch this story onwards somewhere and it would get progressively worse as no aparent plot becomes available =p
Thank you though
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You're too humble.
Just because stories on this site exist that are 'better' doesn't mean this story isn't good. You have a really unique style of writing that many stories on this site don't have. You were never blunt and the story was never 'bland' with explanation of what the characters were doing. It all just sort of flowed.
I'd kill a litter of puppies to write with half the prose you have.
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Are you gonna make me start pony drama in the comments section? Is that what you want hmmm? I've got a truckload of OC dark backstories from teh viles of da interwebs to throw at youuuuuuuu.
(I don't have a ponysona, and if i did it wouldn't be a pony, it would be some kind of benevolent spirit thing, kinda like a reverse windigo)
And how dare you threaten puppies in my wake
in all seriousness i just mean it becuase you said 'it's the best you've read in a long time' which i find a bit flawed. New awshum stuff is put on here every...week?
BU tyeah, thanks again for the praise