Some ponies aren't really satisfied with the lives.
Would Caramel be one of them?
(Caramac, Coltcuddling,fluffy, nothing serious but if you don't like then go away?)
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That was super cute. Awwwwwwwwww
First off, I liked it. It was utterly pointless fluff without any real plot, but sometimes thats just what you need. Something cute and fluffy to just make you D'awww a bit. This fic acomplishes that nicely so good job on that.
You could use an editor though as there was a few odd sentences and a lack of commas.
I would recomend to seek out one of the editor groups on the site for your next fic, it will make it that much better.
Thumbs up from me.
D'aaaww~~~ I'd happily take all these cvity inducing feels~!! :D
I must admit, that was rather sweet.
loved it....freaking cute
Now this is the kind of story I really like. Honest, heartwarming, true romance.
It's fun to at times just read positively about the little things in life like this. It was really quite sweet ^^
I absolutely loved reading this story, it made me go awwww more times than I want to count lol loved it ^^
just out of curiosity, why did you take chapter 2 down? the reading afternoon and cuddling between the two was the cutest thing I've read in a long time any chance it might be put back up?
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It's a separate story now, still on my account. It's the one called "Like a family".
I separated them because i don't really have plans to just 'keep adding' to this like it's a series, and leave a gaping 'incomplete' title on this story when it is acutally complete. My future stories about them or any pony could be varied, as well as the tone of each story and even the length. This was just a lil fluff drable i made. My stories abou them could be thrice this one's length
So yeah,
Reasons basicly
2885744 I actually found that last night lol
but either way, both were very cute I really hope you write more Caramac along the same storyline in the future