http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uGjHsLnUO1U. So kik me if you want, I'm Railtaiser.
When Scootaloo goes missing, everypony is worried and searches for her. While they find nothing, Fluttershy finds something that will scar her for the rest of her life.
Maybe Rarity isn't the kind mare everypony thought she was.
Read at your own risk.
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you get an unamused pinkie, who happens to be covered in flour, for your efforts.
Better luck next tiem.
3599649
Oh... Okay.
3599674 It's okay, bud. I just submitted a crappy fic for the hell of it. Mine will probably be worse.
i kinda liked it
but
THE CLICHES THEY BURN
3599677
I've read some of your fics, and they're pretty good.
This story felt really pointless. There was no conflict at all. There was no intrigue. It's just like 'hey Rarity kills ponies in this story.'. Oh is she getting found out? No she just kills ponies. Why does she do this? Because she can. Next.
3599736 Meh. They're mediocre as hell. I still have to work on alot.
Thank you, though
3599740
It sort of is. This was more of an attempt to write something dark.
3599730
I agree with you, it is awfully cliche.
How can someone write something like this?
3599750. Your next challenge should be adding plot. How about continuing this story? Have somepony show up at the boutique just as she's about to kill Fluttershy and they hear what's going on. Rarity tries to talk her way out of it but Flttershy us heard again. The rest us for you to figure out.
3599826
I've been considering it. I intend for Twilight and the Princesses to get involved.
3599836
My, what a lovely coat your picture has.
Sure would be a shame if something were to happen to it...
*reads story*...da f**k?
3599822
With a cookie.
3600002
3600000 Don't you dare! *War face*
3600004
NO! Not with a cookie!
I'm only favoriting to find out what happens. NOT because I like it. I was only reading out of fear as soon as you said Rarity's dress was orange with purple fluff. I'm only gonna read this out of fear for every pony.
3600105
3600131
I think you'll be happy with the end result.
3600289 sequel pleeeeese!?
3600365
Oh alright then. As soon as I write it.
3600414 yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3600450
Shh... just go to sleep
3600454 I'll be waiting.
3600336
Has mixed feallings about that.
3600618
If you like Fluttershy, then you will be happy.
3600644
Here's my top five list for ponies:
1) Rainbow Dash (for personal reasons. Personal, not sexual)
2) Scootaloo
3) Fluttershy
4) Princess Luna
5) Princess Cadence
Now you see my problem. That and I'm not sure if I can trust you.
3600667
You can't trust me. But the next chapter is epic, trust me.
notthisshitagain.jpg
3599826
Adding plot? This isn't a clopfic.
But I know what you mean. I've written some of the next chapter, and some very unexpected things happen.
3603212. Sounds good.
Amazing clop and this grim dark masterpiece
Wow...the needles thing threw me of cause that's usually a death sentence ....but who cares I threw her into a pit of syringes so ehehehehehehehehehehehe....... keep this horrificness of badassitude up...its...in the words of the great Nigel T. "Smashing!"
Cupcakes ripe off just different characters
I see someone got inspired by Rarity's new Patterns ;)
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Have you seen Ed+'s Rarity's new Patterns? This is essentially close to that. ><
fuckin hell, that was deep