Crystal goes to visit two very special figures in her life, wishing to tell them about a decision she has been considering for some time.
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Amazing
Nicely done, but no tears here mainly because I'm a master at repressing any and all emotion. That being said I would consider it sad, nicely paced and pretty much what any mother would say to their child when they are at that point in their life.
Beautiful, just beautiful.
So Spike's hibernating, right under the tree that Sweetie Belle and Crystal were talking on?
.............Right???
There's a lot of superfluous verbiage in there. It adheres to premise theme, though, so it's forgiven. All in all, an effective one-shot.
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Nice and well thought out one-shot. I'm very surprised how you could fit so much history into the story without it feeling like I was being bombarded to death. Good on you!