2k words chapter, finally

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shame on you Zam.
for shame.

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I didn't mean to break it!

My fingers just started typing and by god I just couldn't stop!

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Aww. that would have been a heck of a twist. And it MIGHT have gotten at least Tia and Luna off of him...maybe. Knowing how some of your other alicorn stories go, it might actually ENCOURAGE them...

Tisk tisk. That's a time out zamairiac. Go on put your nose in the corner and don't move for 10 minutes, and think about what you've done.

He is a young immortal?

I KNEW YOUR MUSE WOULDN'T LET YOU GET AWAY WITH SHORT CHAPTERS! I AM VINDICATED! I AM GROOT!

Cover art has been changed...because I can O_O.

Don't feel.so bad Zam. It was an inevitability, and the chapter did come out awesome.

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It did come...what?

Well, hopefully he'll have a better chance at surviving.

Yes.....YES.....

LET THE MADNESS CONTINUE!

FUCKING EAT IT!!!
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Ahem, anywho good chapter!
c:

When I next opened my eyes…it was only to find myself beneath a luxurious bed.

I think you mean 'upon a bed' or 'beneath the covers of a bed'.

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Just noticed that now, changed it!

I fucking love you no homo!!!!!!! how I met your mother indeed!!!!

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Mwahaha!!! My magic though unknown has made him type over 2000 words!!! Also awesome stuff mate.

i knew this would happen but it's not a bad thing, right?

This is so damn fitting... including Bennys' face

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He's not their father, I did say in the Author notes

Though that doesn't mean we've seen the last of Gaia

Gaia....Earth...MOTHER EARTH???
Discord, what were you thinking? I mean, seriously. Maybe he was doing it to be nice, maybe he just tossed a bunch of ideas into a hat and then tossed him into the hat as well, but this could either go better than we expect, or it could go to Tartarus in a handbasket REAL fast!

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but that way was funnier!

"Lay with me, young immortal,"

So... When did this happen exactly?

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Aww, I was kinda hoping Lee would be their father. It would make the situation so much worse for him

4825248 What are you up too now... We've hade rape, incest, mix of the both and mind rape in the past... So what's next, you crazy (brilliant) bastard?

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Nope!

One incest story is enough for me

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I was thinking along the lines of a harem/herd.

I've never done that before...just need to get Chrissy on the bandwagon, and maybe Twilight too.

oh deer god

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Didn't see that one coming! Yup, totally shocked here... So fucking surprised...

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I'm sensing sarcasm

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Most stories write herds pretty simply. They tend to make it out as a number of girls merely sharing a guy.

I have plans for this one. Each mare will have a role, all will be focused on making Lee happy.

...Oh and a spell might eventually pop up to make his stuff knock them up. But not a for a bit yet

its be weird if he was too!

Wait.
No…No!
I broke the word limit!
NOOOOO!

THE TIME HATH COME, AS PROMISED! I FORESAW THIS!
Great chapter though! Your penmanship is just as good as your creativity, as usual.

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Sorry. Meant to write come out awesome, but apparently I went brain dead for a minute. It is fixed now.

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But wouldn't this be an incest story already? Celestia and Luna are trying to (insert preferred euphemism here) with the same guy, and now seems that they are trying to do (insert second preferred euphemism here) with him at the same time.

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...maybe

4825247 i was wondering the same thing

THIS STORY CONTAINS SOME SERIOUSLY OOC PONIES. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!

I'm not sure if this is supposed to be the warning or the hook.

My name is Gaia

So, what, Lee is going to fuck the—

Alas, I am much too old to involve myself as I once did

Nope. Of course not.

"Why are upset?"

Uwotm8? Just saying

That guy really needs to learn how to say no.

This story is so awesome.

4825649 Isn't saying no what caused all this.

...Gaia, ay? Didn't Kratos kill you?

Okay, first of all. No, Lee is NOT Celestia/Luna's father. Just wanna clear that up :P

...Is he Discord? That's what I immediately thought when Discord sent him back in time.

Wait...this bitch is immortal?