Princess Celestia and Lee Timings had a good relationship, but unfortunately their work and schedules caused a rift to come between it. Lee finally gave unto this realization and broke things off with the Co-Ruler. Biggest mistake he ever made.
I'm considering making Luna...well, you know those girls in anime who have an obvious crush on the guy in question yet tries to act all subtle about it.
Well...fun times, Lee is single and Luna's on the prowl.
Wouldn't that be like 50,000? Whowzie, that's alot over 1000! Nah, but still. You're just barely hanging on to that slim word count limit, pal! But good job with the chapter overall! Keep up the good work, and have a /10
I actually hope things work out in the end and they love each other for ever and ever... And ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever.
3593910 By 'perfectly' you should have realized I didn't mean whether they were in character or not. I'm saying that he writes them in the way that is most entertaining for me.
Well that happened. And it will probably get worse when he does convince her that there isn't another mare. On that note, with you having said that you might consider Luna having a crush on him, and knowing that Celestia is very kinky in this story I have this feeling that Celestia is going to convince her to help her capture him with the promise of sharing.
The guy has to be prepared for the waves of crazy he activated, was he really so naive as to think that one talk and everything would be solved? The only way to take on the break up would be for him to stand strong every time she came back to "TALK" and after many, many attempts she would finally give up.... or maybe she is a step above the level of crazy I'm uses to, in which case the bastard should just take his own life, because batshit crazy and sun god don't mix well. Hope it's not the second option.
I don't know why I find it funny when you use British English words such as 'arse' even though I use them all the time in my everyday life, it's just seeing that randomly placed amid loads of American English makes me laugh for no apparent reason...
Onto something worth saying, who cares if Celestia is in character? It wouldn't fit with the type of story you're trying to go for, which is obviously comedy because it was very funny. The whole anal fiasco had me.
RUN FOR YOUR F***KIN LIFE LEE!!! You've pissed off the pony who can bring the sun down on your head!! Awesome chapter :D. Annnnd thats another story into the favorties section ^_^
3594009 Well I and I'm sure I can speak for hundreds of others, happen to love your stories. You just happen to be one of my favourite writers here and I have no clue why I am not following you...
I bless you with the 50 stars of freedom Lee..... but even you should know to never make a woman or mare angry especially when said woman or mare is in control of the FUCKING SUN
I honestly don't mind if characters are OOC, but only if it's pulled off in a pretty spectacular way. The fact that you make the show's Celestia - a loving, kind, fair, and generous ruler - into nothing but a very kinky, lustful, adorable, seductive, amazi- the list is long with anything related to sultry or cute stuff. In other words, I love the kind of Celestia you portray here! It certainly fits the genre and main idea of this humorous story, hence 'Running from the Sun.'
Celestia's eyes were glowing a fierce white as they glared down at me, angry golden tears streaking down onto the ground, the earth melting as it sizzled from their heat.
3596050 I never thought that either. It's just annoying when ever I see people fling that kind of accusation around, as though you were charging people money just to read your story or something.
3596067 So far, I've thought that it's pretty funny. I kind of get the tired of the serious fics that most writers put together so this is a nice change of pace.
short chapters and crazy antics make me a happy reader.
Well over a thousand words there buddy
3593950
By 500!
I did say 1000 or there abouts XD
So it counts, and I rhymed
Alright this is just great
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Five hundred is a fairly large stretch for an "about" 1,000 word chapter
And yeah you did... We need a Zecora emoticon for that, knighty get on it!
This is getting good, love how OOC Celestia is. Are we gonna see Luna, Twilight and others?
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Luna? YEP!
Twilight? YEP!
I'm considering making Luna...well, you know those girls in anime who have an obvious crush on the guy in question yet tries to act all subtle about it.
Well...fun times, Lee is single and Luna's on the prowl.
Oh that will be fun to write when I wake up XD
Another good chapter, keep em' coming.
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Wouldn't that be like 50,000? Whowzie, that's alot over 1000!
Nah, but still. You're just barely hanging on to that slim word count limit, pal! But good job with the chapter overall!
Keep up the good work, and have a /10
I actually hope things work out in the end and they love each other for ever and ever... And ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever.
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Get over yourself, I write how I like, just as you do.
If it's that MUCH of a burden to see my name and repetitiveness every so often then block me and move on.
Either way I'll still be here, writing, for the people who actually don't mind what I write about.
This is just a hobby after all, jeez.
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Mainly for what Lee and others say, the sex tag is there for that too.
This is gonna be good! Cely sounds a bit like Fluttershy when she's angry.
3593910 By 'perfectly' you should have realized I didn't mean whether they were in character or not. I'm saying that he writes them in the way that is most entertaining for me.
Well that happened.
And it will probably get worse when he does convince her that there isn't another mare.
On that note, with you having said that you might consider Luna having a crush on him, and knowing that Celestia is very kinky in this story I have this feeling that Celestia is going to convince her to help her capture him with the promise of sharing.
The Yandere is strong with this Celestia.
Now THAT is more like it!
The guy has to be prepared for the waves of crazy he activated, was he really so naive as to think that one talk and everything would be solved? The only way to take on the break up would be for him to stand strong every time she came back to "TALK" and after many, many attempts she would finally give up.... or maybe she is a step above the level of crazy I'm uses to, in which case the bastard should just take his own life, because batshit crazy and sun god don't mix well. Hope it's not the second option.
Just this...
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Why do I see this ending in hardcore/forced/rape sex?!
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I think if it had that, it wouldn't have a comedy tag instead of a dark one.
Oh man this is funny as hell.
I think I just busted a gut.
RUN MAN RUN! *random background pony* She gonna kill you.
I don't know why I find it funny when you use British English words such as 'arse' even though I use them all the time in my everyday life, it's just seeing that randomly placed amid loads of American English makes me laugh for no apparent reason...
Onto something worth saying, who cares if Celestia is in character? It wouldn't fit with the type of story you're trying to go for, which is obviously comedy because it was very funny. The whole anal fiasco had me.
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RUN FOR YOUR F***KIN LIFE LEE!!! You've pissed off the pony who can bring the sun down on your head!! Awesome chapter :D. Annnnd thats another story into the favorties section ^_^
C-E L-E-S T-I-A Celestia- Let's Go!
RUN LEE, RUN TILL YOUR LEGS FAIL!!!!!
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3594009 Well I and I'm sure I can speak for hundreds of others, happen to love your stories. You just happen to be one of my favourite writers here and I have no clue why I am not following you...
I bless you with the 50 stars of freedom Lee..... but even you should know to never make a woman or mare angry especially when said woman or mare is in control of the FUCKING SUN
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Just switch the dominating part and killing part of the upper right, and it's true.
I honestly don't mind if characters are OOC, but only if it's pulled off in a pretty spectacular way. The fact that you make the show's Celestia - a loving, kind, fair, and generous ruler - into nothing but a very kinky, lustful, adorable, seductive, amazi- the list is long with anything related to sultry or cute stuff.
In other words, I love the kind of Celestia you portray here! It certainly fits the genre and main idea of this humorous story, hence 'Running from the Sun.'
I haven't read the story yet, but from that description, I have one thing to say...
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3595319 Figured it would be more along the lines of
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My advice for Lee is as follows:
3595381 And now for something completely unrelated...
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Following for shits and giggiles.
3595409 Please that has never been proven.
I simply find they gave up too soon.
XD XD XD Keep up the good work!
Just giver her a name Lee! Throw somepony, anypony, under that bus and save your own ass!
Oh my God my side's.
I'm loving this story and Lee's personality.
Somethin I whipped up.
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IT'S NO USE! I CAN'T NOT FAVORITE EVERYTHING YOU MAKE!!!!! YOU WRITE TOO WELL!!
looks like its time to run but for a little insurance
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I think celestia falls under misc. don't you?
have fun dying, Lee.
3596050 I never thought that either. It's just annoying when ever I see people fling that kind of accusation around, as though you were charging people money just to read your story or something.
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Meh, whatever. I'll just keep doing what I do best for now and please you all :D
On another note, what do you think about the story?
It's a bit different from the seriousness I usually portray in my work
3596067 So far, I've thought that it's pretty funny. I kind of get the tired of the serious fics that most writers put together so this is a nice change of pace.
short chapters and crazy antics make me a happy reader.
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A thank you!
I am using it now, muhahahaha