Really, this one also has a mature tag?

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It will most likely need it once my imagination takes over

3592804 K den.

The giggling Princess suddenly quietened down and chuckled mirthfully, before lidding her eyes at me and adorning her muzzle with a peculiar grin.
"Not to you," she growled sultrily.
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Haha, nope!

haahahah
that made my day!

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I'm glad

Also, dat ass!

Insert shades and lip bite.

You should have seen what she did at Scootaloo's birthday party.

Did she suck his dick in front of everypony?

Eh heh. AW YIS!

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Nope...well yeah, later on.

It involved one vibrator, one cock ring, a feather duster and a lot of whipped cream

"Not to you," she growled sultrily.

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You are the best writer for Alicorns I've found yet, you portray them perfectly, can't wait for more.

Whelp...somehow this is going to involve a car battery, a barstool, and an angry midget...

You know, I can just picture the ending being him, and Celestia saying ''and that is how you was conceived'' to their children, why they have mortified looks on their faces.

Damn......I always hate reading stories with only one chapter if its not completed......because than you got to wait for the next one.....oh well.
Other than that great chapter! hope to see some more!

I laughed and laughed and laughed. This is hilarious and I want more of it.

I can tell this is going to be way over your self imposed 1000 word limit. Stop trying to fool yourself with low limits.

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NEVER!!!

I shall prove you wrong!!!

Well that last sentence basically summed up my reaction to everything I hate ever...

Just a spot of curiosity though, if Celly had somehow managed to convince him to go through with it, would she use a magical dong or a dildo? Don't know why this came into my head, but whatever.

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Wut?

Um...yeah, I suppose

Hmm...

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Nope, I don't see that ever happening.

I have no idea what I just read but I see it's gonna be interesting.......in a way

3592963 why not both?

Eeeeeeh, poor Lee.

lol dat ass

cool story
(i also like the fact there are 3 Luna profile pics in a row)

At least you had the decency to alert the reader that your princesses are horribly OOC.

god damn this is funny i need moar.

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Really? Because I'm willing to bet that other writers actually keep the princesses in character.

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So will I, but for a completely different reason obviously.

Hmm, you never do seem to like my work

No matter, onwards I go!

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I am not sure that was implied. Although that is a sentiment I hear often.

I think this was just a comment on the appreciation of the fic's quality....

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Haha, nope!

RUN BRO RUN!

It's good... but you're a bit off your game on this one... Still, thanks for writing it. It was a fun read.

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Off my game?

If you're talking about its deviation from my usual style, it's because the fic is supposed to be over the top, not serious, a joke ect, ect.

If not then I have no idea what you're talking about, elaborate please

3593356 Nah, too easy. XD

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Tease!

No more comments from me mister!

3593375 bahaha! XD Troll. *snickers* eh heh. mmk, serious now. *coughs* (And for the last time, it's Miss! I'm a girl. ._.;) Anyway, what I meant was there's normally more of an edge in your works with some low key but funny adult humor. You know, the kinds where when you read it and you get it it's like "Ha! I see what you did there!" In this one it's straight to the brutal (and for poor Lee here, I do mean BRUTAL) point. poor guy. lol. It's also understandable with your current on-goings in life and all, so I get it. btw, anything I can do to help with that?

great story man great story
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you know Zamairiac, your story's are the only ones that I upvote, Favorite and then read
because Its always been a good read.
perfect reaction at the end too.
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yeah man! run for it!

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Unless you can revive the dead then no.

Brrr, anyway. I'm going to go and finish the second chapter, prepare for some Celly chasing Lee action!

Not that I won't make it at least a littttle bit serious before she goes nuts

Why is Lee breaking up with her again?

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Various reasons.

Arguments, not seeing each other enough, the fact that she nearly breaks his hips everytime she gets all Alpha mare.

Apart from the last one, he's splitting up for pretty common reasons

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I apologize; it just irks me when I see someone writing a story just to cater to his/her fans (you actually say this on your profile; I pay attention).

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Fans, people who enjoy my work, ect?

Yes I do write solely for them. They tell me what they think, I either smile, or grimace but take what they say and try to improve, I always try to improve.

Please try not to take this story seriously. I'm writing it as a bit of relief, as well as something to help ease my writers block.

"Why anal of course!"

Holy sh*tt*s Celestia has no shame!

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Nope. not an ounce of it in this story

3593535 What does she mean by 'not to you'?

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To put it bluntly, she's had it up the ass, he hasn't.

You figure out the rest

3593553 Oh right.

This has made my day!