Fun chapter I enjoyed the return and the adventure in this chapter

“You had to say it didn't you?” I muttered under my breath as I held up my prosthetic and counted down from three. Before stepping back as soon as I hit one, the room was beseeched from all sides by my guards including Lily of all beings. From the doorway, window, balcony door, and even four unicorns popping into existence. “Really?!” I said completely annoyed.

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You know I didn't even think about that meme when I wrote that scene, lol

That was a very fun chapter.

Caught up again

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I Understand the first six chapters are very rough on how they are written and played out. But that comes from that this story started off as a means for me to work through problems and issues in a more creative means then I was doing before it. But after chapter six the story took a life of its own and I only started posting it after a push in the right direction from a friend.

I know it doesn't excuse that they are rough but just the reason behind the why they are. As for the Spelling and some of the word hiccups that comes from being dyslexic for the most part. I will have to check out centurion project, it sounds interesting.

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Thats fair enough. Though itd prob still be a good idea to touch them up a bit now that you have a lot of experience.

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I mean why not touch them up? You can get more readers, show off your growth in writing, and improve the story. You dont have to rewrite the plot, just flesh it out a bit

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The story is great especially the plot and mc, but its never a bad idea to touch up old chapters when youre writing a long story like this

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And a misplaced word here or there isnt that much of an issue anyways, and having some friends or fans read over it can fix things like that pretty easily.

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Oh also hope ya keep updating. Love this story!

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I have to say author, those memory stuff in the first six chapters, considering they came from you working through stuff, make me wish I could do somethin to make ya feel better. If any of that stuff was expressing something some assholes did to you irl, fuck em, I just want ya to know that from your writing I can tell youre a good guy. And to not beat yourself up too much. Also lovin the story so far ^.^

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Also im assuming since the si mc was heavyset and thought of himself as far that maybe you think that too and I want ya to know im fat too, and it doesnt matter in any way other than the bs health stuff it might cause, speaking from experience, XD but in terms of self worth, being fat doesnt have anything to do with how much your worth. Its all about who ya are. And as cheesy as it sounds, as a fat guy, ive found girls like you more when you stop caring that youre fat and just be yourself, and in any case girls that do care if youre fat, arent the kind you should be going for anyways. But I dont know, maybe not being able to comfort the mc makes me want to encourage you authorman. In any case, keep up the good work, and as ive found in dating as a fat guy, throwing out lotsa nets does catch fish

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Ill definetly come back. But I just gotta take a bit of a break from the story because theres a lot of drama and its hard for me to read stories with a lot of drama. But I really like the story and will come back

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Though I do hope storm improves and gets more and more out of his funk over time

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Well without spoiling anything. Storm just like anyone else has his ups and his downs.

Hello hello,

I enjoyed it a lot this story but I was just wondering, if the story is still in writing or paused ?

(Sorry for the bad english, not my first language :|)

Any plans to continue this awesome story?

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I'll answer both of you in one reply. The story is still being worked on. But due to a lot of slamming at work it's made the process so on top of writer's block at different moments.

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Alright, as long as you don't abandon the story I'm perfectly happy to wait a few months or however long you need because I really enjoy your story and how you write

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Oh goodie, glad to see it's not abandoned as I only just discovered this story and was wanting to read it. I just hate reading abandoned stories, no matter how good they may be.

Welp, with that out of the way, onto the adventure!

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The gender thing is not going to be a permanent thing in the story. It will always be temporary at most. That doesn't mean that there won't be more gender flipping but it won't ever be permanent. I got way too much planned for a male Firestorm to make him female permanently.

Damn this has been a wild ride so far, and I love it, can't wait to see what happens next!

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Oh how naive I was..... going on nearly 3 years with not a single word from the author.... yeah, imma just say what everyone is thinking, story's dead, abandoned.

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You could always just message the author ^_^

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Funny thing is I used to, but after being ignored 99% of the time I have found it pointless and a waste of time to do so anymore. But, plus side, actually receiving a response makes me want to do a re read lol

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Well I do try to reply when I can. But sometimes life runs away with me which is part of the reason why the new chapters haven't been posted. I have two done but require editing and I am working on another but a lot of rl stuff is making work extremely slow on the story. It is still being worked on.

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Thank you <3

Once again coming back for a re read. Kinda just going through my favorites lol