Woke up confused, lost, and bearly a memory. This is a story about the journey an ex-human goes on to find love, happiness, and friendship. But no road is easy and there is always that looming shadow over head. Will he make it or fail? Lets find out.
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I like the world blueballing him because its funny. Wasnt sure How i felt about shadow but i think in later chapters He'll be a valuable asset
as bad as the grammar is, i can overlook it because im enjoying the story, but FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY the random replacement of words is going to be the death of me! (Allow me to make up an example for your concession.) [where as concession should be convenience.]
That is creepy @-@
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Well she did say it's going to sound creepy lol, by the way. What did you think of the fight in this chapter?
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To be completely honest with ya the fights have gotten a bit boring, there are plenty of them and they all end pretty much the same way.
On another note I hope the groups obsession with Twi and storms sex life doesn't go on for much longer, while it would be a step in the right direction for there relationship Twi and the group seem to be pushing it instead of them talking it out or it happening naturally when they are ready.
While Storm is currently the most liked charcter in my book I hope he knocks off the constant apologies and self deprivation. It seems like all the charcters ever do is apologize to each other for the littlest of things. While this wouldn't be a bad thing usually, they turn around and pretty much do the same thing again they just apologized for.
Overall everything is becoming a decentivised, the main character gets hurt all the time so it's hard to really feel something when it happens. Storm sprouts his willingness to die for his friends so often that the line has lost the Impact that it once had. Overall everything is a bit repetetive, him losing his eye was a bit of a shake up, the scene where he gets it back was too. But for the most part the characters really don't do much different then what they did before.