Woke up confused, lost, and bearly a memory. This is a story about the journey an ex-human goes on to find love, happiness, and friendship. But no road is easy and there is always that looming shadow over head. Will he make it or fail? Lets find out.
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6748664 I also enjoy large chapters, as they feel more like proper chapters to me. Just enough to make it feel like a contained story but yet part of a bigger one. Well that's how I treat these chapters anyway. as for the first two chapters, in honest the first six where more written for me to work through stuff in my life and from there it took a life of it's own. Also the poison joke chapters where planned out to happen like that from the beginning once I the story took a life of it's own. As for 'fire's' new family. Those will happen but they do have their placement in time as of this comment I'm still quite a few chapters ahead from what I have been posting. The only wait really is for my editor to go through each chapter before I post them. I do look forward to hearing feed back it helps keep my motivated in writing this story that has taken a life of it's own.
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6750809 you'll have to read and find out. I can't spoil it this early.
6771379 That must have been one hell of a shot.
6783522 No I didn't put a break when the dream stopped. But there is a line that tells you right before "Fluttershy" attacks him that the dream was over.
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Well I did warn people about the first six chapters
I was originally not planning to post this story, till some friend talked me into do it. Mostly for the fact they enjoyed the story. As for the Major No-No's for and HiE. I stand by the saying that some No-No's can be done if they are done the right way. As for the whole Alicorn bit. I don't understand how it could "absolutely murders the setting and any remote hope of logic" From your comment you have only gone through the first chapter. Read through the rest of the available chapters and see how the story itself unfolds.