Woke up confused, lost, and bearly a memory. This is a story about the journey an ex-human goes on to find love, happiness, and friendship. But no road is easy and there is always that looming shadow over head. Will he make it or fail? Lets find out.
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6968286 it's really good. the character development is spot on and very in depth, as well as it being very descriptive and informative. (always good) all in all i would give it a 9/10.
The replacing of words can be a bit annoying but i can deal with it.
(i'm not really a reviewer but this is my honest opinion)
6968403 Thank you for indulging my question and I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'm sorry about the replacing of words, I don't really have an answer to why I end up doing that by accident. I hope you enjoy the chapters to come as I'm having fun writing them. I also hope you enjoyed the latest chapter as it's leading into some big chapters I have been looking forward to for a while now. So once again, Thank you.
Is it a bad thing that I want to know the story that has Cadence embarrassed?
Unpopular Opinion (I think): Storm treated the interviewer harshly, Storm should have answerd the question about why he destroyed his house for the following reasons: 1. This would have raised awareness for dronies and thier storms
2. This would have stopped gossip about whatever he was doing whilst missing
3. The interviewer would probably paint him in a negative bias, say the Storm has Mental problems (yeah he has depression but whatever)
4. This would ruin the chances of a future interview since would to scared to interview him
5. First impressions Matter
I feel like Storm is smart enough to know this since this stuff happens all the time on Earth, but whatever you're the author
PS love the story so far, sorry if I seem harsh