Woke up confused, lost, and bearly a memory. This is a story about the journey an ex-human goes on to find love, happiness, and friendship. But no road is easy and there is always that looming shadow over head. Will he make it or fail? Lets find out.
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D'awww.
6416134 I take it you enjoyed the scene at the end of the chapter?
6416488 Yup.
6416488 me and this version of dash think a lot alike about them being in a cabin in the woods alone thing....
6417864 you wouldn't be the only one. My friend who is a few chapters ahead had the same thought.
Man I'm really glad you cleared that up. I knew you had a good surprise for us and you did not disappoint. Good chapter my friend good chapter
6424124 To be honest, I was quite worried about people would have thought about the reasons behind it and me holding off like I did before concluding it.
6427512 what?
WHY THE HELL IS THIS SO DEPRESSING?
Don't mind that i just couldn't resist
I wanted to tell you to keep this story up, i read it in 2 days and i'm gonna be honest:
You deserve a 2k likes and about 600 views per chapter, why? Because this story is 'Waiting for drama effect' AWESOME!
Keep up the story, you deserve the best.
6431109 thank you for your kind words. I'm always worried about what everyone will think about each chapter coming out. Between the long chapters and the events within each. It's comments like this that make me glad that my friends talked me into posting it.
I'm going to stop reading this story here because it's just that bad the main character is still getting his butt kicked still acts like a pussy and loses against everybody and enough with the nightmares there are not even No Sex in the story I mean just one seen that can help it maybe but until then I give this Thor two thumbs down it sucks
"Everypony" and alot of the pony vocabulary is stupid anyway, there are more than just ponies on the planet. It feels like a snub to the other races and more then a bit xenophobic
The "boo hoo ponies aren't evil like the hoomans" thing that alot of Human MCs have is udderly retarded. More than most of humanity just lives there lives without the "bone chilling depths" of evil that most MCs like to complain about and alot of the time it just comes off as petty bitching about things the author doesn't like about there own race.
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I agree with you on that point, but I do see some of that stuff as necessary evils we just deal with. Even the MC in the story would agree. But in the same sense that there are things even beyond that of the normal day just known to be true and has happened can be unthinkable to anyone.