Woke up confused, lost, and bearly a memory. This is a story about the journey an ex-human goes on to find love, happiness, and friendship. But no road is easy and there is always that looming shadow over head. Will he make it or fail? Lets find out.
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Our protagonist is god damn unstable...
mOAR PLEASE?
5933521 My editor is currently working his way through the next chapter. So it will be a little bit before the next chapter is up. But in the mean time, why don't you tell me what you thought about this chapter?
5933426 Let me ask you this. If you were placed in his position in all this and have to go through all of that. Would you be stable at all?
5933593 >.> I'm kinda dull and don't care much about most things happening in my life...
I guess i will look at it and say meh and continue doing what i was doing...
5933567 I like it a lot but there are a few grammar mistakes... also happy he's telling twilight how he feels...
Oof hope storm can get a bit more stable. The drama is starting to be too much
Oh my god storm I want to slap you out of all this doubting of yourself and your friends, its getting ridiculous
I think Ive gotta take a break from this story for a bit. Its good, but its a bit draining to read with how much drama and bs the mc goes through
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Sorry I didn't reply right away, work has been a slam since covid started. But to unpack a lot of this. Thank you for the comments. They were fun to read and I get a lot of where this is coming from. The thing I should address is the self doubt. That's coming from a lifetime [To Firestorm] of depression, degradation, and more from before he came to Equestria. Whoch isn't something you can easily get over. He does work through a lot of it but it's hard to work through all of it.
I will tell you this, there are times I let Storm dip into the OP pool. Like say Chapter 29.
As for Storm's overall power. Storm does get stronger, maybe not one for one training wise. As for Storm's Stormed State. He can change at will into it. Combat wise his strengths comes from thinking outside of the box as he fights. It's not always perfect but you'll see.
I do hope you come back to read more as I do enjoy reading your comments.