Woke up confused, lost, and bearly a memory. This is a story about the journey an ex-human goes on to find love, happiness, and friendship. But no road is easy and there is always that looming shadow over head. Will he make it or fail? Lets find out.
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Alwasy am confused why the ponies force their Anypony shit in fics. Surprising that Griffins did not wage war on Equestria because of being pissed of the ponies correcting every time they do not use pony words.
(Me in his situation) "Stop correcting me damn it!"
Turn out he is everypony out raged
Did I see a 'cupcake' reference?
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Why yes you did.
Amazing.
I applaud you.
Although that is probably what my reaction would be too.
This character is more like me than like Ian.
I can relate to his reactions.
I like a lot about this fic, but the wording and how everything happens so fast is confusing. Everything feels a bit all over the place. But its good enough that I wont write it off right away, but I want to wait a bit for it to be more polished. I think youve got a decent start but I think these early chapters need a bit of rework. You dont have to change the plot, but maybe stretch things out a bit and explore the emotions and stuff a bit more, you know like flesh stuff out a bit. Id love to come back and check it out again then. And if you want a fic that does a good job at exploring trauma for reference, check out the centurion project. As someone who's had to deal with a fair bit of trauma, that fic handels it in a way I feel is very realistic and well done.
God this shit gets annoying. It's just that it's a blatantly species exclusive term in a word inhabited by many species that are NOT ponies or even closely related. Honestly I'd even go as far to say it's xenophobic in some ways, like other non-pony species aren't even being considered. Everyone is such a better term since it's an all inclusive word and doesn't exclude beings simply because of their species. If I was him, I'd be a bit more confrontational about it and tell em to stop trying to correct me.
Sorry, it's just that it's a pet peeve of mine regarding stuff like this.