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Productive faffer


*Something profound.*

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By doing whats right. damn this mofo is crazy.

I like him already!
He does it not because he want to be a hero but because it is what is right.
I'm sick of stories with "Heroes". I want a story with a character who does it because it is right.

ლ(ಠ益ಠ)ლ ONLY 14 LIKES!? WHAT THE FFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!

It's so well written :pinkiecrazy:

*eats oreos*

I ran out of oreos.................
:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
WHERE ARE MAH OREOS!?1/?!?/1/!?!?!

BLOOOOOOD MOOOOOOOOOOON!! Dafuq where are my cookies.

*Blood Moon points at Pinkie Pie* :pinkiehappy:
oh good shit.

Need moar bloodmoon, Please my lord. Share with us some of your holy work. :heart::twilightsmile:

Damn....madgod....is moved......reminds madgod of the first pirates of the Caribbean during the gallows scene.

I find this very enjoyable to read. When I first started reading this it looked a lot like the story I'm (very very slowly) writing, but you have taken this in a direction that I wasn't expecting, or imagine. You sir have not only claimed a favourite from me, but also have put tons of pressure on me to make my story as great as possible. Good job and keep up the good work!

This is a fantastic story!! I liked the whole thing. Keep up the marvelous work!!

Great chapter.

Duuuuude. ITS PARTY TIME!

Nice chapter.

I'm sad for Ditzy's breakup...I hope she gets better. Blood is one lucky stallion if he managed to score a 3-way with the Mayor and her assistant. Overall, this is a great chapter.

So what spells can he use? The way you made it sound he can only use the four Umbra Linguam spells, but he's also using levitation.

5084852. He has a range of spells. It'll be explained in later chapters. Promise.

jxj

I just binge read the entire story (hopefully i can get all of my things done), I'm really enjoying it and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sad to see Blood Moon break up with Ditzy, but that relationship didn't have a good foundation.

hey Pro i'v read this on fanfic will you be doing new chapters after uploding the old?:applejackunsure:

jxj

Nice job Twilight, you know Blood Moon and Celestia don't get along abd then you tell her were he is. Excellent chapter, I can't decide whether the timing is great or horrible. Great because I just caught up yesterday, horrible because I have a LOT of things I should be doing right now.

So now Blood Moon has 2 mares that want to go on a date with him. The dance scene and the part with Rarity were my favorite ones in this chapter. I hope the next chapter comes soon so that Blood can deal with the GoldenHooves and avoid Celestia's wrath.

5113135 I highly doubt Celestia's wrath and the royal guard army can do much to him after reading for a while...He ran when they come, sure. But, it is mainly because he don't want to deal with their bullshit.

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Comment posted by Productive faffer deleted Oct 22nd, 2014

OK, I really want to see Hardhoof get brutally killed. I refuse to believe it that somebody like him could defeat Blood Moon. Still, the action sequence was amazing and Moon's talk with Twilight about relationships was cute, though I do admit that the beginning was confusing. I hope the next chapter comes soon as I want to see Moon disemboweling that SOB.

5229484 For some reason....I don't think Blood Moon can die with a mere stab through the neck...I think to to kill him, it require something along the line of magic weapons...

You can't just leave it at "he stabbed the assassin through the throat" ! That's just cruel

jxj

It took me a while to get to this chapter, excellent as usual. I guess wet get to see if immortal means can't die, or can't die of natural causes.

I'm glad for the quick update. Seeing Sand and. Moon beat the crap out of Hard Hood was incredibly satisfying.i also found it hillarious how Flutterhsy liked the way he sucked the venom out of her, his joke on Rarity (I want to see her reaction next chapter), and the way Scootaloo bought the lie that Moon was her father. I didn't expected Fluttershy to be such a dirty mare (liking the thought of being caught/using dildos and vegetables/her choice of imaginary lovers) and I want to see more if this side, as it's funny. The only thing I dislike was Moon's treatment of Ditzy. I understand the fact that he broke up with her due to a lack of trust, although I disapprove that he ended the relationship so quickly rather than working it out, but the guy was being unnecessarily hostile (hitting her in front of her daughter as a response of getting slapped for insulting her) towards her even when she attempted to patch things up and was being accompanied by Dinky and Time Turner. Dude, I get the fact that he has issues but those kind of actions won't make him popular in town and would end up getting him in trouble. I hope Twilight learns how to keep him in line because heroic guy or not, you don't hit/insult a girl that wants to apologize to you in front of her child.

5267742 Almost like he isn't quite mentally stable or something.
Almost like he acts like some kind of master assassin who isn't scared of the guard or a village.
Almost like he's a jerk but doesn't care anymore.

5267766 Bwahahahaha!
Edit: Added this for no reason.

jxj

Excellent chapter. I ready didn't expect that out of Fluttershy, but as soon as the cucumber came out, I knew where it was going. I wonder if Scootaloo will get attached to Blood Moon considering her reaction.

5267742

Fully agree.

jxj

I'm not sure what to think of the fourth wall breaking, I'm typically an not a fan of it. Besides that, great chapter.

That fourth wall o.O
And that door on the fourth wall O.o
And a whole lot of awkward moments in the story...:D

5281322 S'what I'm here for. And thanks for Twi's fighting music, one hell of a catchy beat. :twilightsmile:

Hm...Interesting...
Edit: now we continue to wait for the next chapter.

For a guy that asks about being loyal to his mares, he didn't have any problem sleeping with Fleur (maybe the heat influenced him but I don't think he knew about her condition) or kissing Rarity. I hope that doesn't come back to bite him in the ass when his mares find out. The fighting scene with the guards was awesome and I did find it funny Moon, Dusk, and Hunter's reactions to watching those unknown mares sleep with each other. Fancy Pants, as usual, is awesome for fighting Blood Moon competently yet having a nice friendly chat with him. Also, why do I have the feeling that Feather is attempting to join Moon's herd by establishing connections with Twilight and Fluttershy? Wouldn't Fleur get in trouble with Famcy for nailing Blood Moon? Lastly, I enjoyed watching Celestia lose her patience and Moon's dislike of the word herd. Thanks for the grat chapter.

Celestia forgot that Luna has dreamwalking ability and already know where Blood Moon is....and probably what he up to too....

Nice chapter keep going. :pinkiehappy:

Will we see again Dark Guard and Gloom Watch in a another chapter?:rainbowhuh: It would be great ! :pinkiehappy:

Love this chapter.

jxj

Excellent chapter

Eh...Not many know about his sorta true immortality, is it? They simply think they can kill him like that...thinking he is only ageless.
Well, at least we get to see ultimate assassin on assassin action [and some smack down with derby/ditzy...probably...I don't appreciate letting personal vendetta (more like tempertantrum) getting in the way].
The memories are sweet, though.

Nothing is true, everything is permitted.

Interesting development...And I guess Luna will be the first to make up with BM. After all, she is closest to BM and she clearly want him back despite all she said about wanting his head on a pike.
Also, that thing is a new poison...guess there is another poison to study, to resist, to cure, to be immune to.
Also, am I the only one seeing that the way the princesses hate BM is like how a little kid with too much power throwing tempertantrum?
Good chapter I suppose...Please, continue.

Oh my God, this guy just pumps out Content.

Holy Shit.

It's crazy.

Damn, that chapter was intense.

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