• Member Since 13th Nov, 2013
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My stories are converted from greentext, so take that into account. Also all my characters name's are Anon. It's an /mlp/ thing.


Anon is a Spartan-IV and a member of Fireteam Crimson. When he accidently finds himself on the wrong end of a Forerunner artifact, he finds himself in Equestria. It has to be a dream, right?

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 119 )

read this on /mlp/. very nice work

Sweet, a SPARTAN with the unicorn helmet. This couldn't get any better, continue on.

This is pretty solid, keep up the good work!

Fuck,Now i want windshield wipers on SPARTAN armor.....

Can't wait for the next chapter:twilightsheepish:

holy crapola. this chapter comes out the second im done with the third. literally.

So he's got a charger helmet with a party hat put on the spike?

3522647 meh,I like the concept of just banzai charging with a spike,Its why im a fan of gears 3 more than the other ones

This is why you should shove faith from mirrors edge into a suit of Mjolnir armor and give her the agility augs

I've been looking for a spartan mlp story. This one is satisfying my thirst XD Keep up the good work!

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Good job on this one.

This was one of the better chapters. love this story so far dude. can't wait until tomorrow! :pinkiehappy:

I will admit, it’s been fun but I haven’t been able to lift a finger without you crawling up my butt cheeks.”:ajbemused:

”Butt… cheeks… Interesting.”:twilightsmile:

I can't stop laughing

I can't wait for more keep it up:pinkiehappy:

Fucking bendy straw! XD I'm dying right now! Keep it up!

the fuckin bendy straw man. cracks me up with him acting like a 6 year old.


....You know,Im starting to compare this to Ren and stimpy,And i dont know why

This is DEFINITLEY that highlight of my day

Dude,This is fucking hilarious,And it has wit!.....Which is basically my number one thing for a good story

Well this is a definite love triangle between AJ Rarity and anon

I wouldn't call what Rarity is in "love."

3538582 nah its more like she "really" wants to clean anon's horn

3538749 I would laugh if she really just wanted to get him out of his armor so she could give it the scrub down it most likely needs.

3539580 Spartan armor doesnt get all too dirty thanks to the energy shield,Meaning unless your shield is down,everything just bounces off

you with your secrets... good strategy

OMG your story has me on my ass laughing till I can't breath XD Keep up the good work!

3508707 sorry for being a Grammar Nazi but its "señor" instead of "senor"

Yeah, I know. I try to get Word to write it that way, but I only try so much before I just let it be.

Don’t make a girl a promise if you know you can’t keep it.

someppony else noticed this cortana is possesing Twilight

You know our motto. ‘We Deliver.’

was that Eco 04 nineteen

I made sure to add as many references as I could without trying too hard.

RIP worst pone
She was a slut

OH AND ALSO My Twilight sense is tingling

I can't even think of something to say, I'm laughing way to hard

I feel left out because I don't have a halo pic......

Why exactly didnt he just stealth his way out of there?,Or make use of being a walking one man tank?

He didn't stealth out because they already spotted him, and he's not going to disappoint... Let me count, one, two, thr- All of Ponyville basically.

3547028 The cortana reference about the promise crossed my mind but I was too much into the story to think about it. dangit!

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