Twilight tries to bring something from our world to Equestria, but she fails. Unfortunately, failing a spell of this caliber doesn't guarantee you a perfectly healthy human.
A twist on the overused HIE plot point.
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wille179
I write stories so that I won't be kept awake at night with a brain full of ponies.
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3503965
I take it that you like it?
Interesting concept, dull execution. Your scene breaks make sense, but they don't read very well. As well, you leap from slightly related though to slightly related thought.
3504014
Meh, the idea got stuck in my head. I threw this story together in less than two hours. A worthy experiment if nothing else. Though I did mean for it to seem somewhat disjointed, I guess it came out a little too rough. Whatever.
3503977 I like it very much and would love to see this concept explored further.
well thats depressing
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Late to the show, but holy HELL this is HiE done fucking right!
Eternally having to take a piss? That is hell.
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Ikr, can't imagine how it feels to have to hold it in eternally like holy shit