Pinkie Pie, Ponyville's official party planner, and the happiest pony in the world, friends with everypony, you'd think she never had her moments of sadness and sorrow. How wrong you'd be to think that.
Five years ago, back on the rock farm, she finds a cave on one of her little trips on the edge of the farm, and inside she finds a lonely pony. Having discovered that her special talent was to make ponies happy, she approaches her and soon, Pinkie and this other pony become friends. However, this pony is not really a pony... well, not completely.
After an incident that scarred Pinkie since then, she moves to Ponyville to live her own life and meet more ponies to have fun with, hiding a troubled past deep under her happy facade. But what happens when said past resurfaces after so many years? Will the Element of Laughter be able to fix it, or will she turn her back on it and keep the grudge she has against it?
Sounds interesting will read later
Actually, you did a pretty good job there. It doesnt feel rushed, i didnt see any big typos and youre not writing them out of character. Just dont ever include a bigmac pairing and im fine :)
Should be "and neither have they."
I recommend getting a proof reader jus to be safe. you didn't make any other big errors, but it's a good idea to have one anyways.
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Jus? You're telling this person to get a proof reader and you already made a mistake? Hypocrites these days...
I know, it's just a typing error and you didn't mean to do it, but still. Also, why say anyways? You should have written anyway instead. And you also missed a capital letter in one of your sentences. Are you a troll?
Hey author, I really, really like this story. I'm intrigued and would like to know if this is a one-shot. If it is, I am disappointed. If not, more chapters, please? Here is a moustache:
(I'm not American, I spell things differently.)
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It IS marked as incomplete, you know?
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I fixed it, and by the way, I'm a proofreader myself. I am prereading for about 10 people on this site, including Pen Stroke, so typos aren't a problem to me. Still, that doesn't mean I'm perfect, so it's normal that I could have missed one along the way.
That aside, how did you like the premise itself?
I remember seeing this picture somewhere and have always been interested in seeing a story form around it. With that said, I'm glad to see someone taking a shot at it. Looking forward to more!
3323031 Very much. It's a very good story.
3322707 Troll? No, I'm just getting used to a new keyboard, that's all. And Thanks for pointing out my own spelling errors. I like it when people are helpful and give constructive criticism about my writing, even if that writing is only a comment I left in an attempt to be helpful.
3323541 Sorry if I was a bit harsh, because I know that I do it myself. Mistakes are a normal part of life and you learn from them.
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3326351 I completely agree.
To make it short: I LOVE IT!!!
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Glad to hear it, it means a lot to me
Excellent so far. The very few mistakes seem to have been corrected now.
Now it's going to plague me on what happened until the next chapter comes out.
Good chapter.
I would like moar please.
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Don't worry, I'm sure you'll like where I'm going with this.
By the way, out of curiosity, what do you think of Sapphire Heart's character?
I am fully enjoying the story thus far, and I am loving how you are playing out Sapphire, I find nothing wrong with pace, or tone, there is good detail, and I can truely feel for her, I happily await more from this story
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. Though you may want to prepare some handkerchiefs just in case. I DID put the sad tag on 
Thanks
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That is the main reason I am reading it, there is nothing better than a good cry
Let me guess, Pinkie overheard Sapphire?
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Dunno how you came up with that conclusion, but nope. Did you read the author's notes at the end of the chapter?
Pretty good so far, though I'm curious on the length of this. I'm usually pretty good at telling if a story is going to be long or short. I'm leaning towards short story though.
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Well, this might have 3 more chapters to it. With how my original draft is being modified as I think of stuff I could add to it, it also affects the length I had originally planned. So yeah, 3-4 more chapters I believe if all goes well.
I am curious as to learn more about where they come from, and what their society is like.
This chapter is very much what I needed to read. It shall further help me in the project I am doing for you.
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Boy, I haven't dwelved that deep into that yet I'm afraid. However, I was thinking about adding a bonus chapter at the very end that would talk about Sapphire's childhood. It'd include where she and her family came from, how she got to Equestria, and how she lost her parents. Right now, my focus is on the main story, but once it's done, it'll go towards that bonus chapter.
3375668 Cool beans
An interesting little story so far! Won't be able to get to chapter 3 tonight, but I'm looking forward to seeing where its going.
I will say that there were a few places where it felt a bit redundant or telly at times, but that's getting nitpicky. I'm can't wait to see where you take this interesting premise to next time!
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Glad you are enjoying this so far. And thanks for the feedback, it is much appreciated
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No problem! Like I said, really enjoying it. I just picky by nature.
So I just finally finished chapter 3! All I have to say is, can't wait for more!
The only nitpick I really have was when Twilight was summarizing what she knew so far about Sapphire. I guess I could see Twilight doing something like that, but considering we hadn't finished the entire back-story yet, I don't think it was really needed. That one paragraph just felt a little bit redundant.
Again, that's a nitpick. I really enjoyed the rest of the chapter and didn't see any mistakes grammar wise. (Although I'll say right now I'm not really picky when it comes to grammar) Looking forward to more!
Most intriguing indeed. I'm eager to learn more about Sapphire Heart's character, and also to see how things proceed with she and Twilight.
Nice work so far! This chapter seemed to flow really smoothly, to the point where it was actually effortless to read - which is pretty rare, I have to say. I'll be looking forward to reading chapter 3 tomorrow evening. Keep it up!
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Wow, that's one heck of a compliment, dude. Thank you very much
And about Sapphire Heart's character, the flashbacks in chapters 3 and 4 will help show it, and the bonus chapter I have planned at the very end should complete everything, so I believe I've got that aspect covered ^^
Hey, I got to read this tonight after all
Great work once again - it's going very smoothly. The sprinklings of humour were a nice touch, and don't think I didn't notice that pancake recipe 
Loving it!
Pinkie's POV next time? Sounds good - I'd like to see some more of her side of the story. Keep it up!
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Yeah, I did take the pancake recipe from your story. Thought about you and your awesome work as I wrote that little part, so you can feel honored.
Who's reeeeaaaady tooooooooo nnniiiiiiitpiiiick!?!? I know who, MEEEEEEEEE!
To start, i didn't think the summary-paragraph was necessary. Second, Sapphire almost outright raped Pinkie. I really don't think Pinkie needs any more motive than that to be angry.
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You're not the only one to think that Twilight's summary wasn't necessary. The reason I put it is because I thought it fit her character, what with her habit of analyzing everything.
And yes, almost being raped is pretty much why Pinkie's angry, though how did she feel inside when that incident happened? You'll find out in the next chapter
With Pinkie I can't tell if that is sarcasm or not.
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She really meant it. Mrs. Cake succeeded in making her realize she had been irrational in chapter two, even though the pain in her heart was big.
woah, this story is ,like, so neat , dude.
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Thank you!
For a first fic very well written, this going to keep me up late once I've finished my homework
Pretty good, I'd say the only thing even remotely wrong with this chapter was Pinkie's intellectual, very adult way of speaking when she was a filly, it didn't quite match the character.
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Allow me to remind you that no one was really welcoming of her hyperactive behavior, so she had to keep it to herself or when she spent time with Sapphire Heart. And that behavior resurfaced again when she moved to Ponyville.
I hope that Sapphire does get a few good meals in her, because heaven forbid if pinkie finds out she is not eatting enough, that is if they become friends once more, but the truth is that I rather like Sapphire as a character, I mean you would have a cuddle buddy and a bed all in one
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Don't worry. You'll find out how she's been living all these years after that fateful day in the next chapter. I'm happy that you like Sapphire Heart that much; that means I achieved my intended goal
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I love sapphire and I hope she does not have to have a run in with pinkimena, that might get ugly
THE RAPE TRAIN DOESN'T STOP AT NO