• Member Since 9th Aug, 2012
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Brian Jacko


After much heartache from their break up, Rainbow Dash refuses to give up hope for Soarin' and feels that she is being called to wait and be patient for him. Is Rainbow Dash wasting her time by being stuck in the past, unable to move forward, or is she really being called to do what she is doing?

This story is a direct follow up to my other story called, "How Much Do You Really Love Me?" I recommend reading that story first before reading this.


Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 26 )

"Spiritual booty call."
That was funny....

3257572 I laughed too. I heard some Pastor use that term. I thought it was great. :rainbowlaugh:

Nice idea on the Trinity. :twilightsmile:
Never thought that Soarin' had fallen that far! :pinkiegasp:
Aw... That's just so romantic! :heart:
It appears that Dashie and Soarin' aren't the only ones who needed learning. This could've counted as a Twilight story as well. :raritywink:
Pinkie, you're crazy. :rainbowlaugh:

You're welcome!
Can't wait to see Part 8!
Tell me, have you ever watched <i>Equestria Girls</i>?

3259260 Oh yes! I bought the blue-ray and watched it not too long ago. I was terrified that it would be a disaster, but it honestly wasn't THAT bad. The ending was pretty emotional too. Again, forgiveness, mercy, and grace for the super villain no matter how evil she is at the end of the story which is really awesome. I don't see myself watching it again, unless some family members bring their kids over and want to watch it. I certainly hope that this is a one time thing only and Hasbro doesn't make some kind of series out of this. I much prefer them as ponies with wings, magic, and fantasy rather than teenage girls. :duck:

I actually wrote a story where the ponies go back into the human world under a special spell that would make them stay true to their pony forms in an attempt to bring peace to the world. I also gave an explanation for Princess Celestia's and Princess Luna's creation in that story too.

The sequel to this story might take a while. I'm having a little trouble with parts of the plot, but I'm sure I'll pull through and find a way to make the story interesting and unique. I'm going to take my time with it and try not to rush, so it may take me longer than usual. Thanks for reading. :twilightsmile:

Well, in that case, I have a good idea of an SiC story for Sunset Shimmer. Just after the events of Equestria Girls.

3262007 Awesome, but I plan on keeping this series prior to when Twilight Sparkle gets her wings, unless something really makes me feel that I need to tell stories in this series with her being an Alicorn. I don't know what's going to happen in season four, and I don't know if I will make any major references in my (SiC) series from the episodes from season three or four, but we'll have to wait and see. The only little joke I put in one of my (SiC) stories was from season four was when Pinkie Pie was singing her solo part in the song, "Apples to the Core." That was it as far as I can remember. It's going to be hard enough getting used to Twilight with her new wings, but I'm sure we'll all get used to it eventually, right? :raritywink:

Thought you should know: "underestimated" is one word.

3332980 I was waiting for this reaction from you! :rainbowlaugh:

Twilight, if you spent less time dungeon raiding, maybe you might have been able to helped your friend no? :trollestia:

As much as I dislike lengthy romantic stuff... I actually thought that these two stories could benefit a bit more from another chapter in between that shows both of the main stars going through their grief.

Now this is just my own opinion but I think it would be more like Rainbow to completely reject Soarin after the way he treated her. It would cause her to build up those 'I'm tough and awesome' walls around her heart. And after Soarin' had broken up with his fillyfriend and come groveling back to RD, she will just brush him off. Being such a strong and prideful character she would act on the outside to everypony (especially her friends) that she had moved on and is completely fine, but deep inside the hurt and pain is slowly eating away at her. Only after encouragement from her friends and opening up to God will she find it in her heart to forgive Soarin' and admit her true feelings. I feel like this whole committed no matter what others may say scenario fits more to Fluttershy's personality.

But yeah... my 2 bits worth...

...however I'm still craving for some dungeon crawling fun! Imagine! D&D classes with the Mane 6! :pinkiehappy:
Oh the possibilities....

3333352 But this is why she behaves this way because the love of Christ has changed her. Her history with Soarin' was precious and meaningful and she was called to do what she did. She didn't have to take him back, but she wanted to because she loved him that much just like how Christ loves her anyway despite her sins. This was one of the messages of this story and the sequel to this story will take it even further once I finish and publish it. (Just a few more days from now I think and it should be ready.)


I get it she has changed to fit the story.. just not used to seeing RD so... vulnerable. :rainbowhuh:

And now that I know how your next fic ends with a certain word...

I can see you really are into Rainbow x Soarin' huh? :raritywink:

I'm not so sure if I can actually call that a sin, but it's close enough. :applejackunsure:

I'm just saying, if this was an actual MLP episode, there would be a sad long song in this chapter. (Which would be cool if you actually wrote in.) :twilightsmile:

A stupid (for me) question:
What is the meaning of SiC?

6170102 Sisters in Christ, it's what they named their group in the first book.

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