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Whaaaaaat?!!! That definitely caught me off guard. This could either become an excruciating, watching-a-train-wreck kind of thing, or a really awesome and fulfilling epic story. I hope it's the latter. I guess it depends on how long it takes to get real-Twilight out and what goes down in the meantime. But really, though... you have created so much angst in my mind and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you continue soon. Thanks for writing!
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Thanks! And this isnt my only story. Wink wink nudge nudge shameless self promotion what
oh , your story lacks or a tragedy tag, or a sad tag or an Adventure Tag.
WHAT!?!?! I did not expect that! That caught me off guard! More! This story has caught my attention! Keep up the great work
Whelp, I'm intrigued. It certainly explains some issues I had with the characterization. I'll be interested to see more!
No..
Noooo...
Noooooooooo...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
...
You have my attention.
Me like..
God damnit, Chrys. How could you ruin such a beautiful ship?!
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....
Oh yeah, changeling, forgot. Anywhore, good chapter
Well that was unexpected. I'll be keeping an eye on this story I think.
Very nice, too rushed at the end, and you should have described in detail the hurt in Rainbow.
[Insert hank hill gasp here]
To rush at the end, but i see three thing that could happen in this cliffhanger.
totally caught me offguard!
Like said before, a bit rushed at the end.
And thre are so many ways tye story could take...can't wait forthe next chapter
Before I continue reading the rest of this chapter I'm calling it right now that twilight is queen chrysalis.
Now I'd like to take this time to say, "Somebody better pick up that phone. Because I fucking called it!"
I'd say I like pudding and be on my way. I have used up all my prediction powers for the day. I have high expectations for this!
Can't wait to see this unfold "evil laugh" well good luck then
Me and my awful references...
Agreed
If this took place after the season one finale they wouldn't know who chrysalis was. I believe you just miss clicked the 2 button.
I also think the sphere amplifies love so she can feed her colony, but also in turn make herself stronger with that love.
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Lol whoops
OH YOU BASTARD! THERE BETTER BE A HAPPY ENDING WITH THEM TOGETHER AND CHRYSALIS DEAD OR SOMETHING!
"gasp"
Twidash master race
Why is it i think it would be amusing if they both are taken back to the hive... and then we can have a dark epiloge.. or maybe a split light and dark ending... that could be awesome...
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I've got writer's block! Help!
This story is good. Really good.
But I don't judge...
...Definitely better than the ridiculously non-committal suggests
I... have no idea what to think of Chrysalis in this story. Should I put this into the "Queen Chrysalis... The Hero?" group? Should I not. I want to believe... but I can't quite figure it out; and I applaud you for that.
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Writer's block, huh? Well, you know what they say (and with "they" I mean me): Announcing writer's block drives people to link you to their stories (and with "people" I mean me).
So have a link to my underappreciated
Chrysalis-story.Twilight's actions made no sense. At all. She watched her girlfriend turn down advances... and that made her MORE worried that Dash would leave her? There's irrational and then there's just plain insane.
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My thought process was that she would be afraid it would happen again and the same outcome would not occur
Mayhaps it is a bit of a stretch
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I understand the logic you were following when you wrote it.
I just think it's too dumb, even for someone as unstable as Twilight.
My face when I read that somepony had to die :
You know, I was thinking to myself for most of the chapter that Twi seemed a bit... off. Especially when she admitted, "I'm better than these ponies," which just doesn't sound like something the real Twilight would ever say.
Time to keep reading, hopefully death-free...
Chrysalis is like dr. Eggman in this chapter
Whaaaaaat! I neen more! So far it's one of the best I've read. When she said she was going to kill rainbow I knew it was chrysalis
You sick son of a bitch I thought this story was finally going to be happy
he he he wet dreams
As soon as Twilight said "I guess not," the alarm bells started ringing.
We will never let you stop! Sure there are weak points and it is a little rushed, but it's still interesting.
Heh, sounds like something GLADoS would say.
Will there ever be an update to this? I'm actually enjoying it and want to see what happens next. Their 'breakup' didn't make much sense though. I saw what you said earlier, but I don't find your logic very... satisfying for my brain. There's just too many missed variables.
6335959 NO.
RULE #1 of FanFiction.
NO.
what is really sad is i feel like I was the one righting this bc i have yet to find a plot point i have not predicted
This story really needs and ending, it's especially good reading IMO.
Awwww dashie
Well it's terrible that this doesn't have an ending...
if you say so 🤰