sorry, but i don't do backstory. I'm just experienced, and this is my first time submitting it to the public.
Following the events of YogLabs: Dimensional Portal, Simon, Sjin and Jesse Cox find themselves mourning the death of Lewis and Sips. But when Princess Celestia tells them about a mythical artifact, supposedly to have resurrection abilities, known as the Golden Horseshoe, hidden somewhere in the Equestria wilderness, the three must quest to find it, with their nine pony comrades, and revive their two dead friends.
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Y U KILL SIPS
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He had to die...
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UGH I MIGHT AS WELL FIND OUT HOW HE DIED!
I like sjin more then sips, he seems nicer to me
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I just like Sips because he's a funny (Slightly narcissistic) businessman who practically enslaves Sjin., as explained in the Final chapter of the first story.
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Sjin is just a nicer funnyier person, I watch the videos on youtube and sips is kind of a mean jerk. I think he isn't like that irl but sjin seems very much nicer. I cant spell words!
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That's why I kept him alive. Funnier is easier to write than meaner.
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Yes, I would go and read the first one, but I have mature off, so I cant read it, because mature is sometimes a bit gross...Also, I love simon, but I am a pure yognaut, which means that I like Lewis better, because astronaut yognaut. Simon is funny but I don't know why I like Lewis more.
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I think I know.
Lewis stands out as a beacon of hope for all those nerdy people out there, and the ones who are never called fit, or cool, and yet he is the host of the most viewed podcast in England, and the ringleader of the most loved YouTube community in the world!
People strive to be like Lewis. They strive to get the recognition he gets. At best, Simon just sucks the popularity from him while he sleeps.
If that answers your question.
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It also helps that lewis is kinda cute
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Well, I guess he's more attractive than an overweight, middle-aged British guy.
Not that I would know.
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. I am female by the way, so this isn't weird. 
When I first heard their voices, I though lewis was a huge muscly guy and simon was a skinny guy. Then I saw the first video they made of themselves irl, and I thought lewis was 18, he looks like a teenager with chubby cheeks
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Okay...
Good.
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He is adorable, I cant help it.
WHY AM I ALWAYS A BADGUY!
great, im not just bad bad guh
im the bad guy's toady
THATS EVEN WORSE!
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You name means 'Lies' and 'Deception'.
Try and make a good character around that name.
Awwww yesssss, Plot development
Go Simon! He'll make a fine commander.
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FOLLOW ME!
I'LL LEAD THE WAY!
3696518 Onward, my Dwarven drinking buddy! ONWARD!!!!
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together we will choke them to death with Jaffa Cakes!
3701695 And steal their ones! And make them bow under the power of our mighty steeds! THE PIGGUS!!!! EEEYYAAAAAHHH! *charges madly into battle*
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His name is Squiggles, and he is a merciless killing machine.
3706896 Mine is Porkins.
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Is he "Havin' a little trouble, here!"?
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This... this is good. Heavy approves.
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I'm trying to pinpoint the decisive thing that has made this story feel so much more... serious than the first one, but I can't seem to find it exactly.
3734730 Simon possibly going Solo and fighting tons and tons of monsters, defeating them single-handedly and returning with the whereabouts of the Golden Horseshoe?
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well... He has something else in mind...
3738836 Ok
YOU KILLED LEWIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yes.
I.
Did.
Archaenon's betraying Sriviramen isn't he.
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not quite.
But good idea/
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Hmm, most intriguing. Is Archaenon handing Simon over to Sriviramen, while also sabotaging new Bort's containment.
Or is Silvertongue betraying both Archaenon and Sriviramen killing GoreFang and freeing Simon.
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Your colors make your ideas very hard to follow.
But neither.
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I realise that my colors are confusing by the way warn me if my text goes red apparently it causes an adverse effect to my mental health resulting in me going of on psychotic rants and making my font size go haywire. I just read chapter 11 and I'm impressed.
is this fanfic finished...cuz i don't like hangovers
Just got around to this story again, and I noticed a minor error. Where you said "pents," I think you meant to say "pence."
I guess Dodger didn't live up to her name. xD
Finally an update
. But, did it have to be a feelings chapter?
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The next few chapters or so will be feeling chapters. Eventually, though, the action, fighty [arts will come back.
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Well, the story isn't finished yet, but...
Yes, there will be a part three. It IS a four part Series.
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I'd say about two, maybe three hours. If not, about two or three weeks.
Plot Twist time, guys!