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Prisoner 24601


sorry, but i don't do backstory. I'm just experienced, and this is my first time submitting it to the public.

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There was once a Pony by the name of Firestrand. An ordinary, disregarded, not-at-all-one-of-a-kind-in-any-way-shape-or-form kind of pony. But there was one secret he kept. A terrible impulse caused by his usually violent behaivor: an impulse to make them pay. And so he will. Why did they shun him? Why do they run from his fire, and why must they have brought upon themselves their own death?
[inspired by my collecting of pony1kenobi's song, 'the End of Ponies]
[picture is NOT what Firestrand actually looks like]

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I'll say this is fair. There's a few errors and a lot of things to do with quotations. I can give you a like for it though.


Yeah, I'm just gonna say it. That OC is hot.

Nice story watching this:moustache:

1244685 The one in the picture.

1245044
Oh. Well, that's not what Firestreak actually looks like. It was just the best I could find. :unsuresweetie:

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well, to explain what the story didn't, the police were working on a bridge about a mile or two downstream. the bridge had blocked the river with rubble, stopping it's flow. When Basalt's skeleton came downstream, it was stopped by one of the pieces. After the piece was repaired, the skeleton got stuck between two others, still blocking the flow. The police then found the skeleton, and realised that there was only one pony in Ponyville that could have caused such severe burns: Firestrand. And so, they tracked him down to the Ponyville hotel, room 343.
and that's how they got there so fast. :moustache:

I think you mean " it was DISABLED, and in tremendous pain..."

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Yeah, sorry. Sometimes my fingers move so fast across the keys that some words don't exactly turn out right. I don't have any proofreaders, either, so that may have something to do with it.

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http://lightningtumble.deviantart.com/

Here. This is a person I paid to do cover art for my story. I wanted a much more complex piece so I paid a fair amount over paypal and they're working on it now. For a basic picture of an OC it's only 100 points, which translates to about $1.25. You can describe exactly what you want your OC picture to look like, then you'll have an accurate picture of Firestreak for everyone. Just figured I'd make the option available.

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