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Draconaquis


I honestly don't do much here any more, but because of a couple stories I check it almost daily. PM me and I'll see it...(Also, We're All A little Crazy is alive)

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Celestia has been observing the human race, and wants to study the rejects of their society.

Discord is bored with Celestias' jobs for him, and finds a kindred spirit in the lunatic prisoner.

Franky is Crazy. Sick. Twisted. Mad. Insane. Psychopathic. Moonstruck. Fucking crazy. Take your pick.

Authors note: The prologue is not required to understand the story. It also has gore, so faint of heart, beware.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 67 )

Crazyyyyyyyyyy
So yeah I could see this going 50/50, depends on where the story goes....

Your doin ok:pinkiecrazy:. I don't really know why I'm reading this:derpyderp1:

PLEASE continue this story and update it regularly, if possible. This has really piqued my interest. Please don't ask why. :twilightoops: :twilightsheepish:

Damn I couldn't comment first. I just cant wait for more thanks again for telling me about the chapter:derpytongue2:

That was really well done, you've caught my attention with this :twilightsmile: Except one small error I found

"Franky waved a hand."

Aren't his arms tied?

2983731 Oooh, thank you. Let me just fix that

Yeah, I agree with Sorrowfulwinds. Also, make it seem like "Franky" is a terrifying, insane man who isn't afraid of getting dirty. But besides that, the story seems good.

Comment posted by BassLegion deleted Aug 3rd, 2013

I would like a medium-rare please!:pinkiehappy:

What did the "psychiatrist" do to his patients?:rainbowhuh:

2989977 I let the reader use their imagination on that. People will tend to take something as the worst that it can possibly be, and that's much better than anything I'm capable of writing.
On another note, I really like your avatar :pinkiehappy:

Welp, time to add another to my "faved for updates" list. :twilightsmile:

I love stories with happy insane people. They really make stories interesting. Not a fan of horror so when it was the psychiatrist I sort of summed it up to "it wasn't pretty" and left it there.

Although Franky does seem to be insane, he doesn't seem like a bad guy. The psychiatrist part was Franky serving vengeance from the psychiatrist's previous victims, plus, he still holds on to some of his sanity. He is smart, cunning, and has a great sense of humor, yet everyone underestimates him due to his happy/goofy attitude. He seems to have a silver tongue and a quick wit, along with a chaotic enough mind to easily adapt and respond to most things presented to him. He is one of the beings that could understand, memorize, and respond in kind to Pinkie Pie when she speaks ludicrously fast.

Over-analysing and over-thinking things is entertaining. More story please.

Waffles.

2984197
Clearly franky is the new Batman, The Batman who kills people.

2990356>>2992462 It's people like you guys that make me glad that I write. It feels good to be appreciated, you know?
2992899Indeed.
Have a nice day!

2993435
Dunuhununununun frankieee!

3030065 I may have to add another tag... If you know what I mean :trollestia:

3031699 Wow, so many days later I come back, and I realize that may have been the stupidest joke I have ever made. Please forgive me.

Also, your comment matches your avatar perfectly


Blood, sex and tears. Have a nice day!

It's been a while...meh, worth the wait I guess.

3102405 I'm glad you think so. I always aim to please. Hopefully the next chapter comes a little faster.

But now, a single, haunting thought echoed throughout his mind. Some part of his brain thought it was a pony princess.

This is a more apt replacement for my summary of the chapter. :twilightsheepish:
We now return to your scheduled programming.
You are now programmed.
Excellent. :pinkiecrazy:

the made made an β€œX”

He did?

Dr. Quinzel? I hope this ain't no foreshadowing. Also, what is the story about again? I'll have to re-read it real quick.

4526477 Hmm, thanks for catching that. I'll fix it.:pinkiecrazy:

Moar... Just...
I need Moar...

To any of y'all that care, I've finished writing Chapter four, I just need to type it up. Working on it, should be up within the week! :pinkiehappy:
Have a nice day!
Edit: It's up!

So, Celestia has mind control thingy. Why not use it on Franky, to make him answer truthfully to her question? Or better yet, give him a little "push" so that he'll love harmony, order and all that jazz.

4550888 I think she want's to learn about him through his own will, although I'm not sure why. I probably will add in some attempts from her to control him in a later chapter, but I don't think it will go well. And I think the little push would wwork just as well on Franky as it would on Discord.

Just finished catching up with the story and I'm very interested to see were this goes.

This is one of the best stories i have seen in a while. Keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

4550931 If Celestia tried to mind control me, I would probably punch her in the face. :pinkiecrazy:

5065443 If you were human you'd probably want to give her a sloppy wet one. :trollestia:

This is a very well written story.

But it severely/ disturbs me.

Comment posted by Clocklike deleted Dec 28th, 2014

2989955 That is screwed up.
I was one of the ones who liked that comment...

Damn, Franky is a really good character. Good job!

β€œIt is so small. Your entire life, all of your experiences, only take up a little space. Have you ever heard that people only use ten percent of their brains?”

No. That's not how it works. The saying is that we only 'actively use 10%'. That means that our human brains are constantly active, and that we don't control every minor function that the brain does. How we breathe, how organs are supposed to move, where individual cells decide to go or replicate, the brain controls all of that. So those red regions you see in the CATscans are the parts we use to think and feel motions.

If we only used 10% we'd be lying on a floor somewhere, not moving, not thinking, likely not breathing.

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