Fluttershy can't believe it, Angel Bunny is dead. Her beloved pet and friend, she cries herself to sleep as the moonlight shines upon the white rabbits grave She never wants to love again. But after a spark lands between her and Big Mac in the Ever Free forest can she let him into her broken heart?
(I'm sorry I suck at descriptions)
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The story seems interesting but you need an editor to fix some of those grammar errors.
Thanks for the nice comment! I have a learning disability so grammar is a hard concept for me if anyone wants to edit this when its finished (eventually) they can help!
Or help with editing while I'm working on it would be lovely as well!
EDIT: Check out my newest Blog post, looking for editors now hopefully someone will be kind enough to help me *wink wink*
Awwww sooooo sad normaly i don't like Angel but this is sad cant wait for chapter 5 :)
I feel like this chapter more or less goes somewhere else
correct me if I'm wrong but does this chapter go after she does the whole "Tell me if you like what you see" thing. Don't get me wrong, this is a great story, I love it.
I hope to see more in the future.
>>TheGentleColtAlex
thanks for liking this so much I'm working hard on it chapter five should be up soon 
>>BlackPinkPrincess I just thought a pet death would be interesting I have nothing against Angel really ecept he can be a douche sometimes LOL
Chapter Five should be out soon!
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Just seeing that part of the description...
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not gonna read this, because of that.
Ha! Nice, was this your reaction :p
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soo sad but I have been promised fluttermac so I shall read on!! 
hey have u found an editor yet? I would love to do that for you!
>>fortheloveofchaos sure you can help me edit this if you want! I'm pretty much done with it though this was just... a thing... yeah I dunno what excuse I have for writing this lol
Poor little Angel Bunny...
Reminds me of this, only a lot more graphic:
There's also supposed to be a space between the period after "twinkled" and "The." Thought I should help.
Poor Fluttershy... Never saw her this weak before.
It's nice to know that Dashie can cry for her little sister's sake.
You really need to fix this run-on sentences, man.
3243906 Well this was my first story. I also didn't have an editor for it either. I can't believe people are still enjoying this!
For your first story, that's pretty impressive.
3321375 Hey thanks
loved thought where the build up it there madly in love kinda a short but's that just my opinion
3405778 hee hee. I think that's what I was goin' for, it was my first story
Great story you have here by the way
3531687 aw, thanks! This is such an old story of mine, I'm surprised that people still like it
Sad start, hope things don't get too worse though.
She certainly took Angel's death really hard if she's not even eating.
I think this and Heat of the Moment should be the other way around, because it picks up from the end of HotM while the latter in turn picks up from the end of The Sweetness of Friendship.
Flutters being flirty is oddly adorbs too.
After a week already, are they? Two chapters ago they had only confessed their love and now they've mated.
Isn't love grand?
This story is just so fast. A week and they have gone from confessing to mating? WOW
4708599 It's my first published story. I can't believe ppl are still commenting on it. ITS NOT THAT GOOD PPL LOL
XD but I appreciate it anyways ;)