When Mother's Day rolls around, Twilight is ecstatic! She hasn't seen her mother in ages! But..the recent events have left her a little depressed, can Velvet find out what's bothering her daughter in time for their fancy dinner?
(This is just a fun little story! I don't expect it to be that awesome! Oh, and it's dedicated to my mom...who IS awesome!! :D)
Thanks so much for ChaoticLightning for the story help! :)
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I've got to admit, we did a good job.
4374199 I think we did too!!
hmmm a little fast paced, but overall pretty good.
and it says incomplete, is there more?
you forgot to put this to complete and i liked it
cute story but I sort of agree with 'Twilight Best Pony'. It is a little fast paced but good.
4377545 I had to get it out fast, and it was kinda dragging on....Meh, it's okay. I know it's not my best story ever. -.-'
*Tirek
The only problem is the tag is wrong. It isn't comedy it should be slice-of-life. Other than that, very good story.