• Member Since 19th May, 2012
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Dear_Celestia


I am here to write fanfics of the greatest show in the world. MLP:FiM

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Fluttershy finds herself in love with Big Mac, but is too shy to tell him how she feels. She tries to find a way to be with him, even if it means by Zecora's magic. Nothing can stop the power of love. It's up to Fluttershy to prove herself, and to build up the courage for the one she loves.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

The story is quite fast-paced
Fluttershy helping Dash with her flying lessons? :pinkiegasp:
Fluttershy does also seem a bit out of character. She is way too straight-forward and isn't even shy

Still a good read though

This story was kinda fast paced, and it seems strange that Fluttershy would have to help Rainbow Dash with flying lessons... but it was a nice read, and goes in my favorites despite how quickly Big Mac and Fluttershy's relationship moved. :)

Thanks guys. Ik t was a little fast paced, but chapter 2 should be better. I shall get a proof reader as well. I may need one

I agree that it was a little fast paced, but very well done.
:trollestia: Celestia approves! :rainbowwild:

Nice story. Fast as everyone has been saying but promising none the less. And I think you want 'vial' instead of 'vile'.

Yeah I was wondering about that. My bad :rainbowlaugh:

Chapter 2 should be up in a day or two.

This escalated quickly.

1004712 "Chapter 2 should be up in a day or two"

WELL, WELL, WELL, WELL, WELL. almost 2 weeks now! i enjoyed it, but by now i'm not so sure there will be a chapter 2. I hope there is though...

loved it cant wait for chapter 2 :yay::heart::eeyup: FTW

Sorry everypony. I have been dealing with college and I just havent gotten the chance to really write much :ajsleepy:

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